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---Siren's Breath

siren’s breath
fog licks the lip of rock shore---
lighthouse halleluiah

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Poet Destroyer A

December 7, 2012 at 3:39 PM

wow...blessed...pd

Michelle Mac Donald

March 3, 2011 at 7:44 AM

Well deserved win, Debbie! Beautifully thought out and projected. You are a woman of profound talent and ability. Best to you, Mikki

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 28, 2011 at 11:04 AM

Congratulations Debbie, on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel

February 28, 2011 at 9:39 AM

Hello Debbie, Congratulations on your win in the contest with this lovely Haiku As Always, Shar

Sara Kendrick

February 27, 2011 at 4:01 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Ralph Taylor

February 27, 2011 at 1:04 PM

Congrats on a well deserved win, Deb. Nice going. xxxRalph

Kash Poet

February 27, 2011 at 11:49 AM

Liked the middle line !Congrats on your win Debbie---kashinath

Debbie Guzzi

February 27, 2011 at 10:55 AM

Just because you can do the form doesn't mean you can do it well, I'm fully aware my haiku would not even make it to a grocery store check out line paper. But, thanks for commiserating I will try to do better next time.

Carrie Richards

February 27, 2011 at 8:37 AM

halleluiah....indeed!! I am sure many a mariner has said just that upon first sighting of a lighthouse beacon!! love it!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 27, 2011 at 8:35 AM

Congrats on your win with this very visual haiku, Debbie-- liked how you used siren over here :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 27, 2011 at 7:37 AM

Congrats Debbie on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write luv.. enjoy your sweet success and top ten win...

Tahera Mannan

February 27, 2011 at 3:18 AM

hey this was undoubtly one of the very best for me.many warm congrats for this success.

Andrea Dietrich

February 26, 2011 at 11:29 PM

Deb, yours was quite visual and I really enjoyed it. Congratulations.

Joyce Johnson

February 26, 2011 at 9:59 PM

Really unique and interesting write. Congratlations Debbie. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

February 26, 2011 at 8:56 PM

Congratulations on your 7th Place Win in my contest, Deb. Annalise

Kash Poet

February 25, 2011 at 7:34 PM

Amazing Haiku!A great entry into the contest!---kashinath

James Marshall Goff

February 25, 2011 at 6:15 PM

I've been there on the shore of Lake Superior.....when daylight vanishes before time.... you are correct, Miss

James Peranteau

February 25, 2011 at 9:25 AM

An awesome write here Debbie ! I see a few more of your writes I want to read, so off I go ! And, you have mail. much love, james

Elaine George

February 25, 2011 at 9:09 AM

Sensational interpretation, Deb. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich

February 24, 2011 at 10:37 PM

I really really like the personification of this one, Deb!! That middle line rocks. Do you mean sirens breathe or siren's breath. I am thinking the second one, with the noun breath.