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This is my first ever footle poem..

Sirens

in pearls 
              kiss curls  

        mermaid
moon-made

teal scales
        tea tames 

        rose light
 jade night 

wine bleeds
           wave heeds

         soul dove 
soothes love 

shell sings
       zeal zings

         stars crease 
sage breeze

heart seethes  
          sea breathes...

lovemagicmeaningfulseastarsfootle

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Howard Kerr

July 26, 2026 at 9:02 AM

Congratulations, Hiya. You are such a deserving winner. An immaculate suite of footles with beautiful rhyming couplets. Howard

Paige Hind

July 20, 2026 at 2:07 AM

I love this form so much, Hiya. You did so beautifully- first ever Footle? - a big wow, love it <3

Sara Kendrick

July 17, 2026 at 4:40 PM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara K.

Kim Rodrigues

July 17, 2026 at 5:24 AM

Congrats!

Joanna Daniel

July 16, 2026 at 10:30 PM

Beautiful, congratulations:)

Valsa George

July 16, 2026 at 9:16 PM

So cool ! You did it. 'Soul dove, soothes love, rose light, jade night' ....... beautiful coupling ! Congratulations on your first place win dear Hiya. Love and blessings!

Paula Goldsmith

July 16, 2026 at 12:03 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Sirens" write. Have a fun day writing away.............

David Crandall

July 16, 2026 at 11:01 AM

lovely images!

Yann Rolland

July 15, 2026 at 3:05 PM

beautiful music, your images sound like broderie very enjoyable reading, thanks poet

Sotto Poet

July 15, 2026 at 3:13 AM

Back with hearty congratulations on your contest win with this stunning footle, Hiya.

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 15, 2026 at 1:39 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the footle contest, a pleasure to read this lovely lines Hiya :) - hugs

Ghairo Daniels

July 15, 2026 at 12:35 AM

Excellent first set of footles, Hiya : Yes ! Each one is magical and meaningful. The entire set together has a beautiful cadence & alliteration is powerful. This one is my favourite: “ rose light jade night ”. Oh ! I c it’s a Win : Congrats, Sweets. I’m not so often here at moment, so not up to date with wins. Have a beautiful day. Xx.

Andrea Dietrich

July 14, 2026 at 11:59 PM

Mermaids are so cool. Great set. Congrats for your win

Karen Jones

July 14, 2026 at 8:26 PM

Hiya I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. It was unique with mermaid, soul dove and more! Well done! Blessings and thanks for your support.

Tom Cunningham

July 14, 2026 at 3:17 PM

Great string of footles Hiya. They're all over soup at the moment. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Tom Cunningham

July 14, 2026 at 10:16 PM

Back with congratulations to you Hiya. Only two lines and four syllables, they certainly pack a punch. Tom

Sotto Poet

July 14, 2026 at 1:00 PM

Dear Hiya, that's wonderful. You perfected this shape, footle on a really metaphysical level. I adore the vocabulary, rhymes, and flow! You have crafted an amazing footle. Very inventive and informative. Good luck with the contest

Hiya Sharma

July 15, 2026 at 8:49 AM

Dear Sotto, thank you so much for visiting and reading these words ever so kindly, this is my first ever footle poem so I was a bit cynical, but truly thrilled to recieve your beautiful feedback! Very grateful ~ sending you light and best wishes

Joseph P. DiMino

July 14, 2026 at 11:53 AM

Wow! Outstanding imagery. Lovely read.

Hiya Sharma

July 15, 2026 at 8:40 AM

Awh,.thank you so much dear Joe, I'm so thrilled that you loved reading thissss, it's my first ever footle set so means alot ~ sending you mermaid-beams and starlight!

Ink Empress

July 14, 2026 at 8:37 AM

Ah this is truly magical, dear Hiya, youv nailed it with this form, footle on a very mystical level, I love the wordplay and the rhymes and also how it flows so beautifully! I especially love “ rose light jade night ” “ shell sings zeal zings“ “ stars crease sage breeze” how unique! And it gives a very joyful vibe ~ soul warming read really! Always a pleasure reading you… Best wishes for the contest ~ sending you light always! Keep shining and sharing always!

Hiya Sharma

July 15, 2026 at 8:38 AM

My sweet empressss, you always make my mermaid heart beam with gleeee hehehehe! You know how shy I was in posting this footle poem lol, nerve wrecking! So glad that you enjoyed reading this and felt the mellifluous vibe! Sending you all the sea-love and starbeams ~ your compliments mean da world!

Sara Kendrick

July 14, 2026 at 4:40 AM

Excellent footles, Hiya. Quite creative and descriptive. If for a contest, they read like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K.

Hiya Sharma

July 15, 2026 at 8:36 AM

Dear Sara, thank you veryyyy much for your sweetest words! Nd appreciation! This is the first set of footles that I've ever written so a bit shy in posting lol. Your kindness warms my mermaid heart! Sending you light and starbeams ~

Nette Onclaud

July 14, 2026 at 3:41 AM

ohh, you lit up the page with vibrancy of footlelorogy ( my invented word, lol) , hiya... fabulous work especially soul dove, soothes love...

Hiya Sharma

July 15, 2026 at 8:34 AM

Awwwwn "footlelorogy " that's creative! And unique! You really are a word smith and I love this new innovation!!! Thank you so much, dear Nette.. so thrilled to see you here.. it's my first ever footle so was quite unsure but your appreciation gave me assurance hahaha, sending you light and mermaid-love :)

Sirens

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