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Sir Elton John

England's knighted ~ Sir Elton John Singer of songs like the classic, Levon Genius pianist, known for tabloid strife Still standing with David, the love of his life.
By Rhonda Johnson- Saunders, January 26, 2012 My first attempt at a clerihew. I hope I did it right! Ninth Place finish in Clerihew / Collaboration double contest

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Date: 1/29/2012 3:41:00 PM
Good job, Rhonda. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/29/2012 8:41:00 PM
Thanks so much, Kim!!
Date: 1/28/2012 9:34:00 AM
I remember when I worked at the Hilton Hotel in Philadelphia years ago Elton and Bernie Taupin came in as giests and the lobby was immediately filled and buzzing for autographs.. so fun..
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Date: 1/28/2012 9:32:00 AM
congrats Rhonda on an awesome win for this great Clerihew on Sir Elton.. he has entertained us with many songs till present day luv..
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/28/2012 2:12:00 PM
Thanks, Linda! I, too, love his music. He is a great lyricist. Although I have to admit, Bruce Springsteen is my favorite. I'll have to attempt a Springsteen clerihew!!
Date: 1/27/2012 8:15:00 PM
I'll say it again, for your first attempt, you did MARVELOUS. ONe of my favorites in this contest. Congratulations.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/27/2012 10:08:00 PM
And again I say thank you. I cannot say it enough! I appreciate your help and kindness.
Date: 1/27/2012 8:49:00 AM
Rhonda congrats on your win, liked it a lot..David
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/27/2012 10:15:00 AM
Thanks, David! Congrats to you as well! I got a laugh from your great 'hew. Blessings, Rhonda
Date: 1/27/2012 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Double Contest" Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/27/2012 10:15:00 AM
Thanks, Carol!!
Date: 1/27/2012 1:05:00 AM
RHONDA, CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful win in my contest* hugs ;-)~p.d
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Date: 1/26/2012 11:36:00 PM
Rhonda, you have all the right ingredients for a good clerihew here.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/27/2012 10:17:00 AM
I'm learning as I go! All feedback (even constructive criticism) is greatly appreciated!! Blessings, Rhonda
Date: 1/26/2012 8:07:00 PM
I think you did well !! Enjoyed !!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/27/2012 10:23:00 AM
Thanks, Debra!! And congrats to you for your third place in the What I love most contest!!
Date: 1/26/2012 5:14:00 PM
YOu did fantabulous!!! Just didn't need the last line. Clerihew is only four lines. And if you end it with love of his life, I think that is a very good ending!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/26/2012 5:26:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea for your help and encouragment! Im going back to edit now. Blessings Rhonda
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/26/2012 5:21:00 PM
Thanks, Carolyn. I saw him in the early 90s with Billy Joel. His outfits were subdued then compared to his earlier days! I wasn't sure about the form. Ill check on it. Blessings, Rhonda
Date: 1/26/2012 4:45:00 PM
A very enjoyable poem, Rhonda. I got to see Elton John perform with all his glitzy outfits. Few can write songs as well as he and his tribute to Princess Di (England's Rose) is a beautiful video on youtube. I think the clerihew has four lines, so you might want to check the form. Wishing you success in the clerihew contest! Love, Carolyn
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