Sir-Prize

Late to the doc
    I ran the last block

  Was about to enter
    when right in the center

  of the office 
    there she stood 

  my old flame

  My brain went a-reelin'
    the room spun around
  I saw 'twarn't no use
    to put my head down

  and pretend it was over
    'cos Lord knows it was not...

  Twenty years later for lovers
    just ain't a helluva lot

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Date: 8/1/2022 7:25:00 PM
Surprise…surprise…surprise as Gomer used to say. A true twinge of the heart - who can put out the flame? I see Michael’s comment below: on my 25th h.s. reunion, I finally got to hug my crush…lol! NK!
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Date: 8/1/2022 4:35:00 PM
Let it be. ~Anaya aka remember why you left me
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/1/2022 6:50:00 PM
Ooh! What a wicked comment! Love it. ~ Howlin' Wolf
Date: 8/1/2022 8:46:00 AM
Oh my, this shouldn't happen to anyone, gw. Nope, twenty years, uh, it takes longer than that to extinguish some of those old flames.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/1/2022 6:49:00 PM
I don't think that they're ever extinguished, frankly. Kind of like smoking. Once you're hooked. You can't quite the habit 'til you're dead.
Date: 8/1/2022 6:21:00 AM
I'm sure you were Surprised or rather Sir-Prize. What did you say? You never know who you will run into Gershon. I hope you departed in good terms. My only question is, did you tell the wife??
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Michael Tor
Date: 8/2/2022 9:03:00 AM
Glad to hear you survived through it all, and all was well my friend...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/1/2022 6:49:00 PM
ha, ha! My wife was with me at the time. OMG. Talk about deep doo-doo. I was in it... All's well; not to worry. :)
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Michael Tor
Date: 8/1/2022 6:21:00 AM
and the follow up is, what did she think?? lol
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