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Sipping Strawberry Shakes

Samantha Sloan is sophisticated and somewhat successful
Surprisingly, she struggles when situations seem stressful
So, she saw a syndrome specialist, Dr. Sabrina Shortcakes.
She simply suggested sipping succulent strawberry shakes.

Samantha found serenity while slurping such syrupy sweets
Surrendering to slumber, she slept on scented silk sheets 
Spent all her savings, but she's safe and spiritually secured
sailing the Sea of Serendipity, stress free and self-assured
Soothed by spectacular sunsets, Samantha secretly smiles
Searching for a special someone on sultry South Sea isles.



December 16, 2020
Alliteration contest, sponsored by Eve Roper

Copyright © Jenna Logan | Year Posted 2020

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John Watt Date: 12/24/2020 9:59:00 PM Sweet, syrupy, somnambulistic strawberry shakes! You never cease to amaze with your clever imagination and poetry talents, Jenna. Big congrats for this fun winner! ~ John Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 1/1/2021 3:56:00 AM Aww thanks so much for your sweet thoughts, John.

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/23/2020 2:18:00 PM That is one sweet, slippery treat that I would eat as well. Congrats on this winner. Sara Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 12/24/2020 5:49:00 AM That makes two of us, Sara. Thank you!

Joseph May Date: 12/23/2020 5:05:00 AM Dr Shortcakes had the cure!, Congrats on your win Jenna, Merry Christmas! Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 12/23/2020 5:58:00 AM Thank you very much, Joseph.

Jo Chamberlain Date: 12/23/2020 2:04:00 AM I really enjoyed your alliteration, very original. It flowed beautifully. Definitely a favourite in this competition. Congratulations on your winning placement. :-) Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 12/23/2020 4:50:00 AM Thank you for reading and leaving such nice comments, Joanna.

Beata Agustin Date: 12/22/2020 9:58:00 PM Wow! Congrats! Cheering you amidst blest Christmas spirit, while sharing with you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 12/23/2020 4:49:00 AM Thank you, Beata.

Eve Roper Date: 12/22/2020 7:56:00 PM Jenna, congratulations on your win. May your family celebrate an enjoyable Christmas with not only gifts, but with faith, hope and peace of the Lord. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 12/23/2020 4:49:00 AM Thanks for your well wishes, Eve. I hope you and your family have a safe, enjoyable holiday season.

Peter Dome Date: 12/20/2020 10:21:00 AM Love this. it kinda shakes. I could smell and taste this one Well done. Hope it won. take care. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 12/22/2020 9:16:00 AM Hi Pete. Thanks...the contest has not yet been judged.

Jan Allison Date: 12/17/2020 4:48:00 PM So spectacular!!:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 12/18/2020 1:33:00 PM Thanks a lot, Jan.

John Gondolf Date: 12/17/2020 8:36:00 AM Such a spectacular stanza, Jenna, best of luck in the contest. Merry Christmas. John Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 12/17/2020 2:37:00 PM lol at your super "S" comment. Thanks, John.

Mark Koplin Date: 12/17/2020 5:30:00 AM That was a lot of fun to read! Great job Jenna! Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 12/17/2020 2:34:00 PM I'm glad you enjoyed it, Mark. Thanks!

Victor Buhagiar Date: 12/16/2020 11:24:00 PM This is great alliteration. I'm sure you'll get a high rating. ~~ Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 12/17/2020 2:21:00 AM Thank you for your encouraging remarks, Victor.

Alexis Y. Date: 12/16/2020 5:40:00 PM Wow!Jenna, And WoW again.You did outstanding job with S’s! I think you have penned your way on the winning list. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good evening:-) Alexis Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 12/17/2020 2:20:00 AM Win or not, it was just a lot of fun writing it. Thanks so much, Alexis.

Beryl Edmonds Date: 12/16/2020 3:38:00 PM What a spectacular Alliteration you’ve written Jenna, so many words starting with S it must have had you scratching your head. Very clever, loved it... Belle Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 12/17/2020 2:19:00 AM Thanks for the great comments, Belle.