Jenna Logan Poet Alliteration

Sipping Strawberry Shakes

Samantha Sloan is sophisticated and somewhat successful
Surprisingly, she struggles when situations seem stressful
So, she saw a syndrome specialist, Dr. Sabrina Shortcakes.
She simply suggested sipping succulent strawberry shakes.

Samantha found serenity while slurping such syrupy sweets
Surrendering to slumber, she slept on scented silk sheets 
Spent all her savings, but she's safe and spiritually secured
sailing the Sea of Serendipity, stress free and self-assured
Soothed by spectacular sunsets, Samantha secretly smiles
Searching for a special someone on sultry South Sea isles.



December 16, 2020
Alliteration contest, sponsored by Eve Roper

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John Watt December 24, 2020 at 9:59 PM Sweet, syrupy, somnambulistic strawberry shakes! You never cease to amaze with your clever imagination and poetry talents, Jenna. Big congrats for this fun winner! ~ John Jenna Logan January 1, 2021 at 3:56 AM Aww thanks so much for your sweet thoughts, John.

Sara Kendrick December 23, 2020 at 2:18 PM That is one sweet, slippery treat that I would eat as well. Congrats on this winner. Sara Jenna Logan December 24, 2020 at 5:49 AM That makes two of us, Sara. Thank you!

Joseph May December 23, 2020 at 5:05 AM Dr Shortcakes had the cure!, Congrats on your win Jenna, Merry Christmas! Jenna Logan December 23, 2020 at 5:58 AM Thank you very much, Joseph.

Jo Chamberlain December 23, 2020 at 2:04 AM I really enjoyed your alliteration, very original. It flowed beautifully. Definitely a favourite in this competition. Congratulations on your winning placement. :-) Jenna Logan December 23, 2020 at 4:50 AM Thank you for reading and leaving such nice comments, Joanna.

Beata Agustin December 22, 2020 at 9:58 PM Wow! Congrats! Cheering you amidst blest Christmas spirit, while sharing with you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you. Jenna Logan December 23, 2020 at 4:49 AM Thank you, Beata.

Eve Roper December 22, 2020 at 7:56 PM Jenna, congratulations on your win. May your family celebrate an enjoyable Christmas with not only gifts, but with faith, hope and peace of the Lord. Hugs Eve Jenna Logan December 23, 2020 at 4:49 AM Thanks for your well wishes, Eve. I hope you and your family have a safe, enjoyable holiday season.

Peter Dome December 20, 2020 at 10:21 AM Love this. it kinda shakes. I could smell and taste this one Well done. Hope it won. take care. Jenna Logan December 22, 2020 at 9:16 AM Hi Pete. Thanks...the contest has not yet been judged.

Jan Allison December 17, 2020 at 4:48 PM So spectacular!!:-) hugs jan xx Jenna Logan December 18, 2020 at 1:33 PM Thanks a lot, Jan.

John Gondolf December 17, 2020 at 8:36 AM Such a spectacular stanza, Jenna, best of luck in the contest. Merry Christmas. John Jenna Logan December 17, 2020 at 2:37 PM lol at your super "S" comment. Thanks, John.

Mark Koplin December 17, 2020 at 5:30 AM That was a lot of fun to read! Great job Jenna! Jenna Logan December 17, 2020 at 2:34 PM I'm glad you enjoyed it, Mark. Thanks!

Victor Buhagiar December 16, 2020 at 11:24 PM This is great alliteration. I'm sure you'll get a high rating. ~~ Jenna Logan December 17, 2020 at 2:21 AM Thank you for your encouraging remarks, Victor.

Alexis Y. December 16, 2020 at 5:40 PM Wow!Jenna, And WoW again.You did outstanding job with S’s! I think you have penned your way on the winning list. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good evening:-) Alexis Jenna Logan December 17, 2020 at 2:20 AM Win or not, it was just a lot of fun writing it. Thanks so much, Alexis.

Beryl Edmonds December 16, 2020 at 3:38 PM What a spectacular Alliteration you’ve written Jenna, so many words starting with S it must have had you scratching your head. Very clever, loved it... Belle Jenna Logan December 17, 2020 at 2:19 AM Thanks for the great comments, Belle.