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Sipping Strawberry Shakes

Samantha Sloan is sophisticated and somewhat successful Surprisingly, she struggles when situations seem stressful So, she saw a syndrome specialist, Dr. Sabrina Shortcakes. She simply suggested sipping succulent strawberry shakes. Samantha found serenity while slurping such syrupy sweets Surrendering to slumber, she slept on scented silk sheets Spent all her savings, but she's safe and spiritually secured sailing the Sea of Serendipity, stress free and self-assured Soothed by spectacular sunsets, Samantha secretly smiles Searching for a special someone on sultry South Sea isles. December 16, 2020 Alliteration contest, sponsored by Eve Roper

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John Watt

Date: 12/24/2020 9:59:00 PM

Sweet, syrupy, somnambulistic strawberry shakes! You never cease to amaze with your clever imagination and poetry talents, Jenna. Big congrats for this fun winner! ~ John

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/1/2021 3:56:00 AM

Aww thanks so much for your sweet thoughts, John.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/23/2020 2:18:00 PM

That is one sweet, slippery treat that I would eat as well. Congrats on this winner. Sara

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/24/2020 5:49:00 AM

That makes two of us, Sara. Thank you!

Joseph May

Date: 12/23/2020 5:05:00 AM

Dr Shortcakes had the cure!, Congrats on your win Jenna, Merry Christmas!

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/23/2020 5:58:00 AM

Thank you very much, Joseph.

Joanna Feltham

Date: 12/23/2020 2:04:00 AM

I really enjoyed your alliteration, very original. It flowed beautifully. Definitely a favourite in this competition. Congratulations on your winning placement. :-)

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/23/2020 4:50:00 AM

Thank you for reading and leaving such nice comments, Joanna.

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/22/2020 9:58:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Cheering you amidst blest Christmas spirit, while sharing with you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/23/2020 4:49:00 AM

Thank you, Beata.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/22/2020 7:56:00 PM

Jenna, congratulations on your win. May your family celebrate an enjoyable Christmas with not only gifts, but with faith, hope and peace of the Lord. Hugs Eve

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/23/2020 4:49:00 AM

Thanks for your well wishes, Eve. I hope you and your family have a safe, enjoyable holiday season.

Peter Dome

Date: 12/20/2020 10:21:00 AM

Love this. it kinda shakes. I could smell and taste this one Well done. Hope it won. take care.

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/22/2020 9:16:00 AM

Hi Pete. Thanks...the contest has not yet been judged.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/17/2020 4:48:00 PM

So spectacular!!:-) hugs jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/18/2020 1:33:00 PM

Thanks a lot, Jan.

John Gondolf

Date: 12/17/2020 8:36:00 AM

Such a spectacular stanza, Jenna, best of luck in the contest. Merry Christmas. John

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/17/2020 2:37:00 PM

lol at your super "S" comment. Thanks, John.

Mark Koplin

Date: 12/17/2020 5:30:00 AM

That was a lot of fun to read! Great job Jenna!

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/17/2020 2:34:00 PM

I'm glad you enjoyed it, Mark. Thanks!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/16/2020 11:24:00 PM

This is great alliteration. I'm sure you'll get a high rating. ~~

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/17/2020 2:21:00 AM

Thank you for your encouraging remarks, Victor.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/16/2020 5:40:00 PM

Wow!Jenna, And WoW again.You did outstanding job with S’s! I think you have penned your way on the winning list. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good evening:-) Alexis

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/17/2020 2:20:00 AM

Win or not, it was just a lot of fun writing it. Thanks so much, Alexis.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 12/16/2020 3:38:00 PM

What a spectacular Alliteration you’ve written Jenna, so many words starting with S it must have had you scratching your head. Very clever, loved it... Belle

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/17/2020 2:19:00 AM

Thanks for the great comments, Belle.