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Poetry/Crown of Sonnets/Sipping Coffee
Copyright Protected, ID 01-1613-480-01
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, January 01, 2024
For the International Contest, Sipping Coffee
Sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 01/10/2024

First Place

Used Collins Rhyming Dictionary and HowManySyllables

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"God is my strength and my shield; He is my soul and my heart; he is my breath, my song, and my reason." Quote by _Constance Sipping coffee- I contemplate my faith, and an ornate church of flickering light; even as a child I heard what God saith, with essence drifting prayers I recite. The small child, who was me, opens the doors, my shoes clicking upon the marble floor; beauty of my faith through the years endures, the huge stained glass windows I still adore. Like my coffee- there is an aroma, a sweet, calm scent difficult to describe; a smell that could wake me from a coma, the church quiet, I think the statues sighed. Dopamine swirls to create emotion; Oh, faith in God is my life's foundation. Oh, faith in God is my life's foundation, and I surrender my heart to his word; to fly a bird- float on a vast ocean, God picks up the pieces of my soul stirred. God is in every tree and bird that sings, and Jesus is but a whisper away; my faith exists in all beautiful things, in each new sunset and sunrise each day. My faith is within every sweet vista, from mountain tops to a green swath of weeds; the loud chorus of birds in rain misty, butter's fluttering and on nectar feeds. I hear him in the sound of snow falling; my God and Jesus in my heart dwelling. My God and Jesus in my heart dwelling, this gift of writing was given to me; sending it on the wings of birds flying, they glide over the valleys and the sea. I realize my coffee has gone cold, new cup brewed- Oh, what a delicious smell; I gather up all my memories old, kissing each one I bid them all farewell. I place them in God's strong arms to carry, and he will let me rest in his white wings; Oh, here is my angel cat called Glory, come to give me her kisses and playthings. God and Jesus help me in times of wraith; Sipping coffee- I contemplate my faith. “God within me is the enjoyer of the aroma As also this dopamine boosting flavour I taste I surrender all pleasures to the dweller of my heart Breath by breath thus that my soul presence be chaste”

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Date: 1/14/2024 1:15:00 AM
Congratulations Constance, it’s easy to see why this one hit 1st place, with lines like (my shoes clicking upon the marble floor) (a smell that could wake me from a coma), I can totally relate! Some effort went into this one, and you reaped the rewards, brilliant poetry, cheers David
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Date: 1/15/2024 12:35:00 AM
David, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, you are right a lot went into writing this poem, several days in fact, working on it a bit each day, edits, re-reads, etc, but the work paid off, blessings, Constance
Date: 1/12/2024 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations on you well deserved trophy win dear Constance..
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Date: 1/12/2024 1:10:00 PM
Silent, thank you so much for the congratulations, and compliment. I worked hard on this poem, blessings, Constance
Date: 1/11/2024 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win, Constance, with such a wonderful and well-crafted poem.
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Date: 1/11/2024 5:31:00 PM
Sotto, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, blessings, Constance
Date: 1/11/2024 3:31:00 AM
This is so filled with Faith I don't know which line claims me more Consntance, Congratulations on your first place, its well deserved , xo
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Date: 1/11/2024 5:31:00 PM
Mystic, thank you so much for the lovely comment, compliment and congratulations, blessings, Constance
Date: 1/11/2024 1:43:00 AM
What a wonderful beautiful write! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 1/11/2024 5:32:00 PM
Karen, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, Constance
Date: 1/1/2024 4:07:00 PM
I love the soft power of 'surrendering all pleasures to the dweller of my heart. Best wishes with the contest, Sara
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Date: 1/1/2024 4:44:00 PM
Sara, thank you so much for the visit, and encouragement, it will be a big poem to write, Constance
Date: 1/1/2024 8:11:00 AM
Simply beautiful Constance :-) Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Anne :-)
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Date: 1/1/2024 4:45:00 PM
Anne, thank you so much for the visit, still working on my poem, and thanks for the encouragement, hugs, Constance

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