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Sins of the Father

Just a maid,just sixteen a serving girl,a go-between upstairs and downstairs ,her scene 'til love was to intervene; She,so young,he,the master's son a web of attraction,begun one rainy afternoon,in June; A familiar tale,oft told of one so shy,the other bold, an affair that hot summer long, despair did conclude that song; A baby came the next Spring but sadly sans a wedding ring, he ,departed for the Great War, the wench and baby shown the door; In action,the teenage swain died, the lass,and bairn,cried and cried the family ,their kin despised, conscience money salved their pride; She another was to marry, Her boy cared for by his Granny Ne're once more to see this first son None alive know why this was done. Consequences lived on from my tale as ,an emotionally crippled male.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/17/2010 1:22:00 PM
This feels as if a story from a classic, English novel. Beautifully written, it makes me want to know more, read more, and hear more about this story. Well done, Brian. Perhaps we will hear more in future poems? ~ Carrie
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Date: 3/17/2010 12:09:00 PM
Sad but all too true ..it happened in those times ..reminds me somewhat of The Scarlet Letter.. a favorite and winner in one of your contests Brian.. thankxxx for sharing today..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/17/2010 11:21:00 AM
This was a scene that played out many times..I did not get after reading it several times did the man who fathered the child die and the child the one that ended as the emotionally cripped male or was the the man that fathered the child the emotionally crippled male..Sara
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Date: 3/17/2010 11:08:00 AM
enjoyed, sad though.
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Date: 3/17/2010 2:26:00 AM
Wow Brian this is a fantastically penned tale - I love the language - Thanks for such an emotional share - :)
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