Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Verse

Sins' Chain Reactions

Sins - they are violations, faults, offenses
Any forms of sins leads to ill guilt feelings
Resulting from human's weaknesses and pride
Disrupting disturbing human relationships
Placing any cognitive being to shame and doubt

{"To err is human, to forgive is Divine"}

To each and every decision and action
Us - human beings must never forget to discern
Anything we do stimulates chain reactions
If sin is seen, beforehand sternly spurn
The devil will provide worldly attractions
But, hear me Human... I appeal to you: BE FIRM!
AWAY FROM TEMPTATION! AWAY FROM DEVIL'S SATISFACTION!
Rather, integrity and a life eternal we must earn...

BY
olive_eloisa 
12:32 am
April 08, 2014

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Funom Makama February 3, 2016 at 10:24 AM Well said and craftily illustrated. A wonderful presentation of this wonderful site. Thumbs up and a definite 7

Jake Ponce May 8, 2014 at 1:00 AM Olive, anyone ever told you that most of your poems offer life lessons just like this beauty? I often come to your page before I go on with my day for pieces of good advice I know I'll find in your work. :3 Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 8, 2014 at 6:19 AM hahaha thanks much Jake.. :) i appreciate your comments.. :)

Joyce Johnson April 26, 2014 at 6:49 PM Good advice for the unwary human. congratulations. Love, Joyce Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 14, 2014 at 4:49 AM tHANKS SO MUCH joYCE.. :) GBU

Paul Callus April 26, 2014 at 7:03 AM Just stopped by to tell you congratulations once again Olive_eloi:) Still remember the short sermon you gave me first time we discussed this poem!!:) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 26, 2014 at 9:23 AM Lools.. Short sermon :D!!! Hahahaha but no this just a simple reminder.. :) thanks dearie Paul Congratulations as well for your win:) tea for a treat :D lools

Dr.Ram Mehta April 26, 2014 at 6:39 AM Awesome win with three stanza suite. Congrats, very unique, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 26, 2014 at 9:24 AM Thanks Sir :) I'm happy for receiving comments from you..:) really appreciate it much:)

Lucilla Carrillo April 8, 2014 at 11:36 PM Very good, You have captured this very well. An eternal life we must earn. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 26, 2014 at 9:26 AM Thanks Lucilla.. :) I'm glad you find time to read Miya writing:) I hope you doing alright:)

Leon Wilson April 8, 2014 at 12:02 PM Olive a nice poem but I disagree with your last line we cannot earn eternal life it is a free gift from God. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 8, 2014 at 1:29 PM Yes, it is true that it is freely given and offered by GOD but isn't it we must also work on it.... :) for at the end of our life our actions here on earth will be judged accordingly and it is then we will know.. :)

Paul Callus April 7, 2014 at 4:46 PM Olive_eloi...today you are my teacher, giving me a lesson of character. I do try to be firm...but those banana skins are so slippery! and why are there so many of them?:) enjoyable read. :) // paul Paul Callus April 8, 2014 at 1:14 PM ...I humbly bow to your reply...the young teach the old :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 8, 2014 at 2:49 AM :) many of them......... Hmmmmmn cause "us" let them to be many,., :o?! Sometimes we put the blame to them but sometimes we must see in us and ask have we tried to re-connect with them so they may see light??? .... Mmmmmmmmmmm--olive_eloi who wants to reach out for more