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Sinking Paper Boat

sailing in half sunk inverse boat other half is filled With muse O agony sail on a paper boat; wind is the captain. drift far, far away until it sinks in depth of holy fire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/6/2015 11:14:00 PM
Hi Anita, first I like the title. Secondly, this is one deep meaning, I'm still puzzling my mind with. However, it's also one of the best free verse poems I read today. Like a Captain steering far, he must sink below... Enjoyed. LINDA
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Anita Sharma
Date: 10/7/2015 5:09:00 PM
thanku linda

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