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Singing In the Hay

there was a young lady from Trang, renowned for her sexual slang, in heat of the moment, sang loud in the foment oh darling I'm so glad you sprang!

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Jan Allison

Date: 3/10/2015 2:42:00 PM

lol made me chuckle congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Peter Lewis Holmes
Date: 3/10/2015 7:31:00 PM

Thanks Jan!....Peter

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2015 2:21:00 PM

gosh, everything is rhymed and metered perfectly. Did she still say all that stuff when it was in this form? Anyway, Congrats for your win, sweet friend. What is foment? I don't think I know that word.

Peter Lewis Holmes
Date: 3/10/2015 7:30:00 PM

Thanks Andrea....foment means... to stir up...agitate..excite! ....Peter

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/20/2015 7:25:00 PM

yup yup perfecto mondo! as the Fonz would say! BY JOVE I think you've got it as Higgins would say to Pygmalion? LOL Light & Love

Peter Lewis Holmes
Date: 3/10/2015 7:31:00 PM

Thanks Debbie...Peter

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/19/2015 7:35:00 PM

Very adult & funny but almost, yet not, limericks :( you could get this to be a limerick please DO check my blog, lines 1,2 & 5 the last words should rhyme and be the same syllable count- lines 3&4 are the short lines & again should rhyme the last word & have the same syllable count YOU CAN DO IT! I am sure! Light & Love