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Singing In the Hay

there was a young lady from Trang,
renowned for her sexual slang, 
in heat of the moment, 
sang loud in the foment
oh darling I'm so glad you sprang!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 2:42 PM
lol made me chuckle congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Holmes Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 7:31 PM
Thanks Jan!....Peter
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 2:21 PM
gosh, everything is rhymed and metered perfectly. Did she still say all that stuff when it was in this form? Anyway, Congrats for your win, sweet friend. What is foment? I don't think I know that word.
Holmes Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 7:30 PM
Thanks Andrea....foment means... to stir up...agitate..excite! ....Peter
Guzzi Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 7:25 PM
yup yup perfecto mondo! as the Fonz would say! BY JOVE I think you've got it as Higgins would say to Pygmalion? LOL Light & Love
Holmes Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 7:31 PM
Thanks Debbie...Peter
Guzzi Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 7:35 PM
Very adult & funny but almost, yet not, limericks :( you could get this to be a limerick please DO check my blog, lines 1,2 & 5 the last words should rhyme and be the same syllable count- lines 3&4 are the short lines & again should rhyme the last word & have the same syllable count YOU CAN DO IT! I am sure! Light & Love
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