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Singing In Solitude

Sensual sounds of a Seraphim swaying soft sentiments of stars swinging, she still senses and sees the stardust from the sorrowful songs she was singing- in solitude, she sails to safety scarred from sounds from a sonnet’s shriek, suffering from strife, she sighs… slayed by the saddened smile she did seek. Alliteration Contest December 3, 2017

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Date: 12/4/2017 2:40:00 PM
From a sonnet’s shriek...we can only imagine!
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/5/2017 5:32:00 AM
lol thanks sweet Kim! :)
Date: 12/4/2017 8:17:00 AM
Hi Luloo, a touching alliterative poem:) well done:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/5/2017 5:32:00 AM
many thanks dear Jo :):):)
Date: 12/3/2017 8:07:00 PM
Sensuously Sweet, Laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/5/2017 5:32:00 AM
thank you sweet Line! :)
Date: 12/3/2017 6:06:00 PM
awesome alliteration all around.
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/5/2017 5:32:00 AM
thank you dear Agnes :)
Date: 12/3/2017 5:48:00 PM
Laura, your write is stunning and stirring in its spiritual sadness. Your imagery is superb in conveying its melancholy feel. An enthralling poem beautifully expressed. Good luck in the contest..
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/5/2017 5:31:00 AM
many thanks sweet Susan :)

Book: Shattered Sighs