Vijay Pandit Poet Ninette

Sing, Birds Sing

Sing, Birds Sing

Sun
Smiling
Gleefully
Blushes blue dawn
While robin's musing
Pink-dogwood dreams
Rejoicing
Blooming
Spring

Where
Playful
Cardinal
Hops, hops, and sits
Then curves a sharp spin
Flying up high
Savoring
Freedom
Flight

Lone
Sparrow
Sitting on
Red maple tree
Whistles and dances
Reveling in
Lilacs and
Lilies
White

Sing
Birds sing
Exalting
Season's beauty
Warbling, frolicking
Serenading
Cheerfully
Sing birds
Sing

Sing
Of joy
Of prairies
Of giggling streams
Of butterflies, bees
Flowering trees
Sing of hearts
Sing of
Love

February 20, 2022
Placed 1st: A Brian Strand Formed Contest
Placed 3rd: Springtime Ninette Poetry Contest
Sponsor: M. L. Kiser
Syllables: 1,2,3,4,5,4,3,2,1

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Evelyn Judy Buehler July 3, 2023 at 5:17 PM So lovely, Vijay. This jewel is a fave.

Sara Kendrick October 28, 2022 at 7:26 AM Congratulations on this wonderful winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my page. Sara

Christuraj Alex March 16, 2022 at 6:42 AM Great ninette. Congratulations!

Valsa George March 16, 2022 at 5:43 AM Once again back to this lovely poem with congratulations ! Glad you have once again started participating in Brian's contest!

Bill Baker March 14, 2022 at 7:02 AM I loved the energy in your verses, the movement added to the flow nicely. Congrats on the high placement in the contest, Bill

Bj Legros Kelley March 7, 2022 at 1:54 PM Ok, I must confess, I am back to reread this beautiful joy filled serenade. I wanted to make sure it was in my favs. I'm so glad I checked; well, it is now <3 Have another beautiful day Vijay, I can hardly wait till you tell us about it with your flowing pen of graceful beauty <3 ~BJ

Andrea Dietrich March 3, 2022 at 4:51 PM cute images of spring birds!! congrats for your win, Vijay

Janice Canerdy February 25, 2022 at 8:35 AM Vijay, your ninette suite is so lovely and descriptive, a delightful piece. Janice Vijay Pandit March 1, 2022 at 5:39 AM Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.

Anitha Jayasankar February 24, 2022 at 2:06 AM Your keen observation of nature and birds is just amazing Vijayji...Anyone who reads this would feel the bliss of spring and rejoice in it, through your words..."pink dogwood dreams", "giggling streams"...beautiful. As always, another lovely creation in Ninette form, best wishes in the contest...God bless...~ Ani Vijay Pandit February 25, 2022 at 5:08 AM Glad you liked the poem Ani. Much delight to read your comments. Many many thanks.

Andrew John February 24, 2022 at 1:12 AM This one makes me, too, sing of joy. Thanks, Vijay. Vijay Pandit February 25, 2022 at 5:07 AM Thank you John--I really like your comment.

Heidi Sands February 23, 2022 at 1:56 PM Oh wow, my friend. This is another one of your best! I love birds, spring and the cheerful tone of your poem. Uplifting and so pleasant! The sights you brought me to see are so nice . . A Fave for me. :) Vijay Pandit February 25, 2022 at 5:06 AM You made my day with your wonderful comments, Heidi. Always a joy to hear from you my friend. A special treat to receive your FAVE. Much appreciate your support. Many thanks.

Bj Legros Kelley February 23, 2022 at 12:14 AM So sweet! I want to join in this beautiful view and listen to the song of the birds. Beautifully penned <3 Vijay Pandit February 23, 2022 at 8:55 AM You are a nature lover and all things uplifting. Much inspiration you convey, BJ. Many thanks.

Anna Marie Kaianah February 22, 2022 at 9:12 PM This poem screams spring. Nicely written Vijay! ~Anna Vijay Pandit February 23, 2022 at 8:53 AM Glad you liked it, Anna. Thank for your visit and comments--much appreciate.

Harry Horsman February 22, 2022 at 6:44 PM Love the poetry that fit the form majestically. Vijay Pandit February 23, 2022 at 8:53 AM Thank you Harry for stopping by. Much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich February 22, 2022 at 4:22 PM Super springy, Vijay!! filled with the exuberance of the season Vijay Pandit February 23, 2022 at 8:52 AM In spirit of spring. Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Kim Rodrigues February 22, 2022 at 3:50 PM Perfect joy in a ninette! Next to last verse is my favorite! Happy Day, dear Vijay! :) Vijay Pandit February 23, 2022 at 8:52 AM Yes--l like it also. Much appreciate and value your feedback, Kim. Many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar February 22, 2022 at 7:08 AM Today I'm sad, but i recognise a lovely poem that captures spring time. Best for a win. Vijay Pandit February 23, 2022 at 8:50 AM Sorry for you loss Victor. Glad you stopped by--much appreciate. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole February 21, 2022 at 11:42 AM "Giggling streams, of butterflies, bees . . . flowering trees" Such a delightful image. My heart is smiling and singing, all at the same time. I'm looking forward to Spring, and your words take me there, my dear friend. This is beautiful in every way. :) Hugs, Brandy Vijay Pandit February 21, 2022 at 1:21 PM Thank you my dear friend. Always a delight to read your feedback. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Silent One February 21, 2022 at 10:17 AM I love this formatting it gives further impetus to the poem.. You always know which words to use to create imagery in your poem... This is a very enjoyable write.. Vijay Pandit February 21, 2022 at 1:19 PM So special to hear that from you, SO. Many thanks.

Valsa George February 21, 2022 at 7:51 AM The very formatting of the poem is so appealing. The content gives a heavenly feel. All the images are arresting, but I love the image of the lone sparrow on the maple the most that whistles and dances. A contender for a top win ! Vijay Pandit February 21, 2022 at 1:18 PM Glad you liked the poem, Valsa. Always value your feedback. Much appreciate, as always.

Joseph May February 21, 2022 at 5:56 AM You did a great job with the theme Vijay, best for a top win Vijay Pandit February 21, 2022 at 6:11 AM Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Paulette Calasibetta February 21, 2022 at 5:40 AM How delightful! You have created such a wonderful cacophony of imagery~here's to Spring! Love this. And good luck in the contest. :)Paulette Vijay Pandit February 21, 2022 at 6:11 AM Glad you stopped by with your kind remarks, Paulette. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Alexis Y. February 21, 2022 at 4:35 AM WoW! Vijay, This is a good entry for the contest. I could just picture each bird in your string of ninettes. It looks like a winner to me. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day my friend-Alexis Vijay Pandit February 21, 2022 at 6:10 AM Many thanks for your supportive and cheerful comments my friend. Always a joy when you visit. Much appreciate.

Swetha Vangaveti February 21, 2022 at 3:33 AM Your words sang the arrival of Spring and my soul is dancing now!! Vijay Pandit February 21, 2022 at 6:09 AM Glad you liked the poem Swetha. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos February 20, 2022 at 10:06 AM Hi Vijay dear friend, another glowing breathtaking write with your golden quill I have never tried writing a Ninette, but i doubt I could ever reach your extraordinary talented flair. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer Vijay Pandit February 21, 2022 at 6:08 AM So glad you stopped by Jennifer with your kind thoughts. Always a joy when you visit. Much appreciate.

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