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Sing, Birds Sing

Sing, Birds Sing

Sun
Smiling
Gleefully
Blushes blue dawn
While robin's musing
Pink-dogwood dreams
Rejoicing
Blooming
Spring

Where
Playful
Cardinal
Hops, hops, and sits
Then curves a sharp spin
Flying up high
Savoring
Freedom
Flight

Lone
Sparrow
Sitting on
Red maple tree
Whistles and dances
Reveling in
Lilacs and
Lilies
White

Sing
Birds sing
Exalting
Season's beauty
Warbling, frolicking
Serenading
Cheerfully
Sing birds
Sing

Sing
Of joy
Of prairies
Of giggling streams
Of butterflies, bees
Flowering trees
Sing of hearts
Sing of
Love

February 20, 2022
Placed 1st: A Brian Strand Formed Contest
Placed 3rd: Springtime Ninette Poetry Contest
Sponsor: M. L. Kiser
Syllables: 1,2,3,4,5,4,3,2,1

Copyright © Vijay Pandit | Year Posted 2022

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Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 7/3/2023 5:17:00 PM So lovely, Vijay. This jewel is a fave. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/28/2022 7:26:00 AM Congratulations on this wonderful winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my page. Sara Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 3/16/2022 6:42:00 AM Great ninette. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 3/16/2022 5:43:00 AM Once again back to this lovely poem with congratulations ! Glad you have once again started participating in Brian's contest! Login to Reply

Bill Baker Date: 3/14/2022 7:02:00 AM I loved the energy in your verses, the movement added to the flow nicely. Congrats on the high placement in the contest, Bill Login to Reply

Bj Legros Kelley Date: 3/7/2022 1:54:00 PM Ok, I must confess, I am back to reread this beautiful joy filled serenade. I wanted to make sure it was in my favs. I'm so glad I checked; well, it is now <3 Have another beautiful day Vijay, I can hardly wait till you tell us about it with your flowing pen of graceful beauty <3 ~BJ Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/3/2022 4:51:00 PM cute images of spring birds!! congrats for your win, Vijay Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 2/25/2022 8:35:00 AM Vijay, your ninette suite is so lovely and descriptive, a delightful piece. Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/1/2022 5:39:00 AM Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.

Anitha Jayasankar Date: 2/24/2022 2:06:00 AM Your keen observation of nature and birds is just amazing Vijayji...Anyone who reads this would feel the bliss of spring and rejoice in it, through your words..."pink dogwood dreams", "giggling streams"...beautiful. As always, another lovely creation in Ninette form, best wishes in the contest...God bless...~ Ani Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/25/2022 5:08:00 AM Glad you liked the poem Ani. Much delight to read your comments. Many many thanks.

Andrew John Date: 2/24/2022 1:12:00 AM This one makes me, too, sing of joy. Thanks, Vijay. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/25/2022 5:07:00 AM Thank you John--I really like your comment.

Heidi Sands Date: 2/23/2022 1:56:00 PM Oh wow, my friend. This is another one of your best! I love birds, spring and the cheerful tone of your poem. Uplifting and so pleasant! The sights you brought me to see are so nice . . A Fave for me. :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/25/2022 5:06:00 AM You made my day with your wonderful comments, Heidi. Always a joy to hear from you my friend. A special treat to receive your FAVE. Much appreciate your support. Many thanks.

Bj Legros Kelley Date: 2/23/2022 12:14:00 AM So sweet! I want to join in this beautiful view and listen to the song of the birds. Beautifully penned <3 Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/23/2022 8:55:00 AM You are a nature lover and all things uplifting. Much inspiration you convey, BJ. Many thanks.

Anna Marie Kaianah Date: 2/22/2022 9:12:00 PM This poem screams spring. Nicely written Vijay! ~Anna Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/23/2022 8:53:00 AM Glad you liked it, Anna. Thank for your visit and comments--much appreciate.

Harry Horsman Date: 2/22/2022 6:44:00 PM Love the poetry that fit the form majestically. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/23/2022 8:53:00 AM Thank you Harry for stopping by. Much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/22/2022 4:22:00 PM Super springy, Vijay!! filled with the exuberance of the season Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/23/2022 8:52:00 AM In spirit of spring. Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/22/2022 3:50:00 PM Perfect joy in a ninette! Next to last verse is my favorite! Happy Day, dear Vijay! :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/23/2022 8:52:00 AM Yes--l like it also. Much appreciate and value your feedback, Kim. Many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 2/22/2022 7:08:00 AM Today I'm sad, but i recognise a lovely poem that captures spring time. Best for a win. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/23/2022 8:50:00 AM Sorry for you loss Victor. Glad you stopped by--much appreciate. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole Date: 2/21/2022 11:42:00 AM "Giggling streams, of butterflies, bees . . . flowering trees" Such a delightful image. My heart is smiling and singing, all at the same time. I'm looking forward to Spring, and your words take me there, my dear friend. This is beautiful in every way. :) Hugs, Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/21/2022 1:21:00 PM Thank you my dear friend. Always a delight to read your feedback. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Silent One Date: 2/21/2022 10:17:00 AM I love this formatting it gives further impetus to the poem.. You always know which words to use to create imagery in your poem... This is a very enjoyable write.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/21/2022 1:19:00 PM So special to hear that from you, SO. Many thanks.

Valsa George Date: 2/21/2022 7:51:00 AM The very formatting of the poem is so appealing. The content gives a heavenly feel. All the images are arresting, but I love the image of the lone sparrow on the maple the most that whistles and dances. A contender for a top win ! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/21/2022 1:18:00 PM Glad you liked the poem, Valsa. Always value your feedback. Much appreciate, as always.

Joseph May Date: 2/21/2022 5:56:00 AM You did a great job with the theme Vijay, best for a top win Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/21/2022 6:11:00 AM Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Paulette Calasibetta Date: 2/21/2022 5:40:00 AM How delightful! You have created such a wonderful cacophony of imagery~here's to Spring! Love this. And good luck in the contest. :)Paulette Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/21/2022 6:11:00 AM Glad you stopped by with your kind remarks, Paulette. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Alexis Y. Date: 2/21/2022 4:35:00 AM WoW! Vijay, This is a good entry for the contest. I could just picture each bird in your string of ninettes. It looks like a winner to me. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day my friend-Alexis Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/21/2022 6:10:00 AM Many thanks for your supportive and cheerful comments my friend. Always a joy when you visit. Much appreciate.

Swetha Vangaveti Date: 2/21/2022 3:33:00 AM Your words sang the arrival of Spring and my soul is dancing now!! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/21/2022 6:09:00 AM Glad you liked the poem Swetha. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 2/20/2022 10:06:00 AM Hi Vijay dear friend, another glowing breathtaking write with your golden quill I have never tried writing a Ninette, but i doubt I could ever reach your extraordinary talented flair. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/21/2022 6:08:00 AM So glad you stopped by Jennifer with your kind thoughts. Always a joy when you visit. Much appreciate.

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