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Sinful Desires

Hypnotize me 
Covet me with sinful eyes 
Luxuriate in my ocean 
For 
It is only you and I 
My lustrous skin begs for you 
It melts with the heat of your touch 
Transcending my borders 
Trespassing beyond all other temptations 
You deliver me unto my fantasies 
Forever and ever 
I am yours 


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Red

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James Inman

May 1, 2016 at 9:37 AM

Intense passion in your write RF.

Robert Lindley

March 27, 2016 at 9:17 AM

I see that any form , must yield to your poetic talent. A sign of immense talent and creativity. Although short,this poem packs one helluva punch. I had to marvel at the power in such creative and sweet brevity. A7

Richard Lamoureux

March 25, 2016 at 8:06 AM

You have inspired some poetic responses, a testament to your artistry.

John-Ovan.P. Hull

March 12, 2016 at 10:17 AM

That's pretty scorching and scintillating stuff and VERY sensual sounding, but with strong undertones of the lords prayer- I hope you get worshipped as much as you deserve to be?

Brian Mcclain

March 4, 2016 at 8:46 PM

Hi Red, Wow--you are certainly deserving of your handle. It is very intriguing that such a passionate poem could paradoxically also be so Zen-like and becalmed. Very well done! Cheers, Brian

Timothy Hicks

February 24, 2016 at 10:13 PM

"Luxuriate in my ocean" ... this is quite the sensual line, Red. Enjoyed your poem.

Richard Lamoureux

February 22, 2016 at 10:04 AM

I was hoping for a new one but still enjoyed reading this beauty again.

Red Fiery

February 23, 2016 at 8:17 AM

Richard, I managed to write something. ..it was sudden mixture of emotions. ..hope u liked it. The new poem is titled sinful desires 2

Poet Destroyer A

February 22, 2016 at 12:08 AM

Of course I remember you, you've been gone a long time. I miss you, and was going to drop by in the near future. I hope your visit means your going to post again, it's been since 2014.... I encourage you to come back and meet some of the new poets .. if you post again, let me know ... I'm here and ready to read all your new poems.... are you established on another poetry site? I'm just wondering.... hugs, Red Fiery.... Linda

Poet Destroyer A

February 23, 2016 at 11:31 PM

Red, my muse is in a lazy mode. :( I can't even call it writers block. LOL, Anyway, I never give up hope.. I'm just glad you are writing again. :)

Red Fiery

February 23, 2016 at 8:18 AM

Thank you Sweetheart ...I had lost hopes in myself...I started writing again..hope u like my new poem...sinful desires 2

Skat A

January 19, 2016 at 12:22 PM

Red Fiery,, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**

David Williams

June 5, 2015 at 1:23 PM

Red this is exotic and tempting and I love it, nice to hear from you and thank you for your comment...Always David

Harry Horsman

June 5, 2015 at 8:28 AM

Saw a comment prompted me to look you up again...wow love this, so profound, so sincere..

Ruben Ramos

March 3, 2015 at 12:35 PM

Very honest poem reflecting, I think, what is mostly on our minds and longing from our bodies. The human freedom chained to its own desires. WOW!!!!!!!