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Sinful Desires

Hypnotize me Covet me with sinful eyes Luxuriate in my ocean For It is only you and I My lustrous skin begs for you It melts with the heat of your touch Transcending my borders Trespassing beyond all other temptations You deliver me unto my fantasies Forever and ever I am yours Redfiery Red

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James Inman

Date: 5/1/2016 9:37:00 AM

Intense passion in your write RF.

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/27/2016 9:17:00 AM

I see that any form , must yield to your poetic talent. A sign of immense talent and creativity. Although short,this poem packs one helluva punch. I had to marvel at the power in such creative and sweet brevity. A7

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/25/2016 8:06:00 AM

You have inspired some poetic responses, a testament to your artistry.

John-Ovan.P. Hull

Date: 3/12/2016 10:17:00 AM

That's pretty scorching and scintillating stuff and VERY sensual sounding, but with strong undertones of the lords prayer- I hope you get worshipped as much as you deserve to be?

Brian Mcclain

Date: 3/4/2016 8:46:00 PM

Hi Red, Wow--you are certainly deserving of your handle. It is very intriguing that such a passionate poem could paradoxically also be so Zen-like and becalmed. Very well done! Cheers, Brian

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/24/2016 10:13:00 PM

"Luxuriate in my ocean" ... this is quite the sensual line, Red. Enjoyed your poem.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/22/2016 10:04:00 AM

I was hoping for a new one but still enjoyed reading this beauty again.

Red Fiery
Date: 2/23/2016 8:17:00 AM

Richard, I managed to write something. ..it was sudden mixture of emotions. ..hope u liked it. The new poem is titled sinful desires 2

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/22/2016 12:08:00 AM

Of course I remember you, you've been gone a long time. I miss you, and was going to drop by in the near future. I hope your visit means your going to post again, it's been since 2014.... I encourage you to come back and meet some of the new poets .. if you post again, let me know ... I'm here and ready to read all your new poems.... are you established on another poetry site? I'm just wondering.... hugs, Red Fiery.... Linda

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/23/2016 11:31:00 PM

Red, my muse is in a lazy mode. :( I can't even call it writers block. LOL, Anyway, I never give up hope.. I'm just glad you are writing again. :)

Red Fiery
Date: 2/23/2016 8:18:00 AM

Thank you Sweetheart ...I had lost hopes in myself...I started writing again..hope u like my new poem...sinful desires 2

Skat A

Date: 1/19/2016 12:22:00 PM

Red Fiery,, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**

David Williams

Date: 6/5/2015 1:23:00 PM

Red this is exotic and tempting and I love it, nice to hear from you and thank you for your comment...Always David

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/5/2015 8:28:00 AM

Saw a comment prompted me to look you up again...wow love this, so profound, so sincere..

Ruben Ramos

Date: 3/3/2015 12:35:00 PM

Very honest poem reflecting, I think, what is mostly on our minds and longing from our bodies. The human freedom chained to its own desires. WOW!!!!!!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/24/2014 9:19:00 AM

Dropping by to wish you a merry Christmas Red.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/20/2014 10:02:00 AM

Thanks Red, I havn't seen you in a while. Come visit, I miss your comments.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/23/2014 6:53:00 AM

Good morning Red, this is an amazing piece of poetry. How have you been?

Red Fiery
Date: 10/20/2014 9:18:00 AM

I came here to say Hi...hugs and good wishes to you Richard

Richard Lamoureux