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Since You've Been Gone

I am undeniably sad Consumed by dismay I am angry at the world Out of sight & in shadows, I stay My stomach churns wild A tempest inside At what my life has wrought I am consumed with fear But I've nowhere to hide Lurches and churns, but I have nothing to hurl My life is just nauseous with strife I've become stricken with worry, For my exhausting life I turn rapidly now In a relentless descent I am a mere product of my grief And in silence, I lament

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Date: 11/15/2024 6:41:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 11/12/2024 1:33:00 PM
The soup is the place to let it out. There is a way to move forward to manage these feelings. To live through and past them. If you have not read poems by Eilsa Wright from Scotland you should. I have been mentoring her all the way from NZ. her poetry has set her free. You have named your feelings in a well constructed poem, a brave write. You have talent. Look forward to 1 that showcases your sense of humor. Just posted my new Christmas poem. Very best regards from this lucky 70 year old.
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