Since You Didn.T Like the First Pickle, Tickle Hears Another One

I found me self in a pickle
When I sat on a thistle
The pricks went in 
I started to scream
They lied, they said it would tickle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 17, 2010 at 10:29 AM
shame on me for not sending out my congratulations,, Well done my poet friend,, Had reading all my entries, I think you had them both right,, have a nice one,..p.d.
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November 15, 2010 at 9:03 PM
WEll, that would not be nice to be lied to like that. haha. Congrats, mad poet!! Luv, Andrea
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November 15, 2010 at 1:10 PM
Nice one Sidney, and boy do these Thistles hurt when one pricks oneself. Congratulations on your win in pd's contest >> James
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November 15, 2010 at 10:18 AM
Congratulations on your win Sidney in P D's contest "Pickles & Tickles *Limerick*". Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 9:08 AM
Con gratulations Sidney on your worthy poem's place, Agape, Moses
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November 15, 2010 at 7:25 AM
Nicely done, Sidney. Speaking from experience or just imagination? Congrats on your win. Dan C
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November 14, 2010 at 11:30 AM
well done placement in the contest!!
Sweetheart Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 7:49 AM
Congrats Sidney my funny friend on this big win in P.D.'s contest ... a grand Limerick indeed as only u can create ..so enjoy the fruits of your labor luv this happy Sunday...
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November 14, 2010 at 6:23 AM
Cute..Congratulations on your win...Sara
Mehta Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 4:39 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Sidney
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October 14, 2010 at 6:18 AM
witty....kicking against the pricks is not advised lol
Neels Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 1:55 AM
If I had to say, I enjoyed this one more Mr. H :) made me laugh!! Oops so not my intension to encourage your naughty side with those cards.. Was attempting to make you giggle.. love and enjoy your Thursday :) Wilma
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