Since Then, the This-That Has Her

SINCE THEN, THE THIS-THAT HAS HER

Aroused
By
Cinema
Downright
Erotic, this
Feature
Gave
Him the
Impetus that
Just
Knowing
Leers
Might
Never
Obvertly
Persuade the
Quiet
Rapunzel
Sufficiently
To
Undo her
Virginal
Ways. Since then
Xerotripsing has
Yielded
Zip!


Re-submitted for the FIRST POEM contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 10, 2010 at 12:16 PM
Katherine, you are so right about the F. I just checked my word program and the F word was not there. That word should have been "FEATURE." as in movie. Best, JT
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April 10, 2010 at 8:11 AM
congrats on being featured this week only F is missing then you have a ABC but great write and enjoyed the read keep up the nice work
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April 9, 2010 at 9:04 AM
Congratulations! Very nice ABC. BGU. Ernilando
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April 8, 2010 at 3:35 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week JT. Love, Carol
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April 5, 2010 at 7:26 AM
Congrats John on your featured poem this week on Soup... an excellent choice to feature and share... bravo..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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April 5, 2010 at 7:01 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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April 4, 2010 at 5:23 PM
Interesting use of this challenging form. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I see you haven't been at The Soup long. Welcome! Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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April 4, 2010 at 4:53 PM
enjoyed reading today, good one!! congrats on the featured poem.
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April 4, 2010 at 1:55 PM
John, many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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March 16, 2010 at 5:40 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup John. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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March 15, 2010 at 7:12 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all ...as this delight tonight... neat ABC poetry.. there is a contest posted which requires an ABC poem.. u many want to enter this one ..click on your contest link and scroll down to enter into the contest ... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup.
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March 15, 2010 at 9:36 AM
Good one John - Like your style lol - Fab share for all -:)
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