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Since Then, the This-That Has Her

SINCE THEN, THE THIS-THAT HAS HER Aroused By Cinema Downright Erotic, this Feature Gave Him the Impetus that Just Knowing Leers Might Never Obvertly Persuade the Quiet Rapunzel Sufficiently To Undo her Virginal Ways. Since then Xerotripsing has Yielded Zip! Re-submitted for the FIRST POEM contest

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John Trusty

Date: 4/10/2010 12:16:00 PM

Katherine, you are so right about the F. I just checked my word program and the F word was not there. That word should have been "FEATURE." as in movie. Best, JT

Katherine Stella

Date: 4/10/2010 8:11:00 AM

congrats on being featured this week only F is missing then you have a ABC but great write and enjoyed the read keep up the nice work

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/9/2010 9:04:00 AM

Congratulations! Very nice ABC. BGU. Ernilando

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/8/2010 3:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week JT. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/5/2010 7:26:00 AM

Congrats John on your featured poem this week on Soup... an excellent choice to feature and share... bravo..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Janette Fisher

Date: 4/5/2010 7:01:00 AM

Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

Date: 4/4/2010 5:23:00 PM

Interesting use of this challenging form. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I see you haven't been at The Soup long. Welcome! Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/4/2010 4:53:00 PM

enjoyed reading today, good one!! congrats on the featured poem.

James Fraser

Date: 4/4/2010 1:55:00 PM

John, many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/16/2010 5:40:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup John. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/15/2010 7:12:00 PM

Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all ...as this delight tonight... neat ABC poetry.. there is a contest posted which requires an ABC poem.. u many want to enter this one ..click on your contest link and scroll down to enter into the contest ... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup.

Bathsheba Bathsheba

Date: 3/15/2010 9:36:00 AM

Good one John - Like your style lol - Fab share for all -:)