Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

Since I Met You

You turned my whole world upside down
When we met in a bar in my home town
I’m full of smiles, I don’t get down

                    Since I met you

Did destiny bring you my way
I’m feeling full of joy today
Fear forsaken, my world's not dull and grey

                    Since I met you

I’m breathless like I’ve run a race
My emotions are all over the place
I cannot wipe the smile off my face

                    Since I met you

My heart is no longer full of strife
You proposed, now I’m to be your wife
I’m having the best time of my life

                    Since I met you

Inspired by  Rhythm and Rhyme Contest
It now doesn't fit the amended contest requirements

4/30/18

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Lyric Man May 13, 2018 at 9:14 PM Jan, your catching tune has me dancing on the floor.. applauding you and wanting more. I'm wanting more and more. So give me more of you! Jan Allison May 14, 2018 at 1:32 AM :-):-) keep on writing those lyrics Chance you do it so well:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf May 2, 2018 at 10:54 PM You are the Princess of rhythm and rhyme lately! Get thee to thy throne, O Fair Damsel! Love it! Great! :) gw Jan Allison May 3, 2018 at 1:35 AM lol Gershon, some folks I think I just write poop so your comment made me smile:-) this was my first attempt for the contest but I had to withdraw it as it wasn't correct and couldn't be amended or it wouldn't make sense:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley May 2, 2018 at 8:57 PM I make sure I fall in love over and over again by buying new mirrors, Jan. Bathroom is starting to look like a fun house. Nice write! Viv x Jan Allison May 3, 2018 at 1:33 AM lol Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong May 1, 2018 at 5:13 PM There is nothing like new love, my daughter is there right now and she is floating in the clouds. Today is her boyfriends b. Day. Well penned! : ) Jan Allison May 1, 2018 at 5:16 PM oh how wonderful Connie I hope it works out brilliantly for her:-) hugs jan xx

Mike Gentile May 1, 2018 at 10:28 AM It's amazing what a new love can do. Your poem reminding me and brought many memories to light, I realty enjoyed it and BTW great rhythm and rhyme xxoo Jan Allison May 1, 2018 at 12:50 PM Thanks Mike it was originally for the contest but when the rule about the refrain was amended to have to be one chosen by the sponsor I removed the poem from soup, as I couldn't alter it for the contest I re-posted it anyway and have written a new one for the contest now:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner May 1, 2018 at 8:33 AM So optimistic and joyful - brought a smile! Jan Allison May 1, 2018 at 8:41 AM This was my original contest poem but the rules weren't clear that we had to use one of the 4 refrains given by the sponsor and it was impossible to change the refrain as the poem just didn't make sense.:-( hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier April 30, 2018 at 5:48 PM Lovely poem, Jan. When inspiration comes it doesn't always respect confinements. I love the form you gave your poem. Most uplifting and superbly done. Jan Allison April 30, 2018 at 5:53 PM I couldn't just file it after I withdrew it from the contest last night so thought i would re-post it today and hope people;e like it:- hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham April 30, 2018 at 5:24 PM Lovely verse Jan, hope you make a speedy recovery. Tom Jan Allison April 30, 2018 at 5:41 PM I'm at the fracture clinic in the morning I hope they can give me guidance as to what I can and cannot do. some people say to rest the hand. others say keep the fingers moving. I will know for sure tomorrow:-) hope you had an awesome holiday :-) hugs \jan xx

Jean Murray April 30, 2018 at 5:13 PM You let your heart win over your head with this loving piece, inspired by your husband Jan. Don't change it. Jan Allison April 30, 2018 at 5:39 PM I won't change it Jean its not really about my hubby lol :-) and I've finally written another its very different to this one:-( hugs jan xx

Harry Horsman April 30, 2018 at 4:13 PM A sure winner if it is excepted Jan...Just love the sentiment and sincerity, it truly comes through in every stanza.. Jan Allison April 30, 2018 at 4:21 PM I can't submit it Harry and it just doesn't make sense if I use one of the required refrains. I will try and write again but it takes me so long to type with 1 hand out of action. Have got time to hope my muse will behave and give me a new idea:-) hugs Jan xx