Simply Mcgee

It was late one night when Finn walked in
And sat next to McGee at the bar
McGee, looking down was wearing a frown
While Finn lit up a cigar

Finn saw McGee was in mourning
By the black band he wore on his arm
And approached his friend so slowly
With tactfulness, Grace, mixed with charm
 
"McGee Who died ?, and were you two close ?"
Where the words that sprang from Finns lips
"It was me cousin Tim that passed"
Then, McGee raised a glass for a sip

"How old of a man was your cousin?"
McGee answered, "Still in his prime"
"Had he been sick and dying, 
Or victim of some kind crime?" 

"No, It happened while he was asleep" sighed McGee
"Well It good that he didn't suffer"
"True, But the folks on the bus he was driving, 
I'm thinking it was a wee rougher"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Manassian Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 6:58 AM
Wow...didn't see that ending coming. Good one. Who would have thought. Thanks for your visit to my poem.
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 4:19 PM
wow, THAT is GREAT. is it for tall tale contest?? wish I had thought this up. FAVE
Thompson Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 9:09 AM
Hey there Jerry..this poem is a really good one. I enjoyed the flow and fun it showed. Have a great one my friend. Hugs, Jess :)
Laurie Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 4:31 PM
Hello Jerry ... McGee's cousin certainly went out with a bang - thanks Jerry - Lindsay
Rodrigues Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 3:51 AM
LOL! Love the back and forth!
Merryman Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 6:26 PM
I enjoyed reading this, Jerry! Loved the surprise ending! Blessings, Kim M
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