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Simply looking, in childlike wonderment 
Thought forms rested, flowing in contentment 
Imbibing currents within us wafting
Feeling heightened rapture scintillating 
Abiding in our native element 

Save soul essence, there is no one present
Ego vaporised, granting heart consent
Awareness self-aware, gently flowing
Simply looking

Mode acceptant, aura luminescent 
Effortlessness ensuring soul ascent
Mind-body humble, goes on receiving
Benedictions divine, enlivening
Bathing in bliss fountain effervescent 
Simply looking

01-September-2021

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Date: 10/1/2021 6:40:00 AM
Perfect rondeau as good as your quietus.
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Date: 10/1/2021 7:51:00 AM
Thanks Victor! Happy you approve

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