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Simply Blue

Emotional pallet that we see
A troubled heart thinking of you
Yesterday’s longing a fiery red
Alone today, I’m simply blue…

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Constance La France

January 10, 2010 at 12:34 AM

Yin and Yang, love of yesterday.. loneliness of today... well done.. and thanks so much for your comments on my poetry.

Carrie Richards

January 9, 2010 at 10:47 AM

Simple and an honest expression of feelings....somedays we are simply blue for no reason. ~

Audrey Haick

January 9, 2010 at 8:40 AM

A heart-touching Quatrain, Barbara. Brighter days will follow for sure! Goes to my favs. Peace and love to you, Audrey

Jared Pickett

January 9, 2010 at 8:35 AM

I have those days more often than I would like to admit.... EXCELLENT write here Barbara.....:JP]

Kim Hilliker

January 9, 2010 at 8:21 AM

Very nice. I really like this Quatrain. Thanks for sharing.

Robert A. Dufresne

January 9, 2010 at 8:14 AM

lovely artistic rendition of emotion, Barbara. enjoyed! -Robert

Carolyn Devonshire

January 9, 2010 at 8:01 AM

Love the use of color to convey passion and sadness in this quatrain, LNC. The reader can "feel" your words -- the mark of a truly great poem. Have missed reading your work! Love, Carolyn