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Simply Blue

Emotional pallet that we see A troubled heart thinking of you Yesterday’s longing a fiery red Alone today, I’m simply blue…

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Constance La France

Date: 1/10/2010 12:34:00 AM

Yin and Yang, love of yesterday.. loneliness of today... well done.. and thanks so much for your comments on my poetry.

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/9/2010 10:47:00 AM

Simple and an honest expression of feelings....somedays we are simply blue for no reason. ~

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/9/2010 8:40:00 AM

A heart-touching Quatrain, Barbara. Brighter days will follow for sure! Goes to my favs. Peace and love to you, Audrey

Jared Pickett

Date: 1/9/2010 8:35:00 AM

I have those days more often than I would like to admit.... EXCELLENT write here Barbara.....:JP]

Kim Hilliker

Date: 1/9/2010 8:21:00 AM

Very nice. I really like this Quatrain. Thanks for sharing.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/9/2010 8:14:00 AM

lovely artistic rendition of emotion, Barbara. enjoyed! -Robert

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/9/2010 8:01:00 AM

Love the use of color to convey passion and sadness in this quatrain, LNC. The reader can "feel" your words -- the mark of a truly great poem. Have missed reading your work! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/9/2010 4:07:00 AM

Wonderful use of color to describe emotion. Keep the creative pen flowng. Sara

Tim Ryerson

Date: 1/9/2010 3:34:00 AM

Well done Barbara!... Like all good poets, you seem to have the ability to turn pain into beauty - Tim