Simply Blue

Emotional pallet that we see
A troubled heart thinking of you
Yesterday’s longing a fiery red
Alone today, I’m simply blue…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/10/2010 12:34:00 AM
Yin and Yang, love of yesterday.. loneliness of today... well done.. and thanks so much for your comments on my poetry.
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Date: 1/9/2010 10:47:00 AM
Simple and an honest expression of feelings....somedays we are simply blue for no reason. ~
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Date: 1/9/2010 8:40:00 AM
A heart-touching Quatrain, Barbara. Brighter days will follow for sure! Goes to my favs. Peace and love to you, Audrey
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Date: 1/9/2010 8:35:00 AM
I have those days more often than I would like to admit.... EXCELLENT write here Barbara.....:JP]
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Date: 1/9/2010 8:21:00 AM
Very nice. I really like this Quatrain. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/9/2010 8:14:00 AM
lovely artistic rendition of emotion, Barbara. enjoyed! -Robert
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Date: 1/9/2010 8:01:00 AM
Love the use of color to convey passion and sadness in this quatrain, LNC. The reader can "feel" your words -- the mark of a truly great poem. Have missed reading your work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/9/2010 4:07:00 AM
Wonderful use of color to describe emotion. Keep the creative pen flowng. Sara
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Date: 1/9/2010 3:34:00 AM
Well done Barbara!... Like all good poets, you seem to have the ability to turn pain into beauty - Tim
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