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Simply Birds

Simply birds chirp, chirping in song, belonging to a cloudy day. Simply birds plink, plinking paradisaically. Wee angels with harps in their wings. Simply my teeny, tiny forest at play. Tweets twine like ivy, inviting a smile. Simply the sweetest sound of mirth. Sans birdsong, saddest silence on earth.

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Paige Hind
Date: 4/16/2024 9:41:00 PM
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Ah, yes! I loved this little piece, so sweet! xx Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2024 4:40:00 AM
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So glad you liked it. Listening to those lovely morning birds now.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/14/2024 10:23:00 AM
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Your "Simply Birds" is a lovely write. I love spring & the birds sing..... Enjoy your spring day................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 3:00:00 PM
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Thank you, dear one! xx
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 4/12/2024 4:05:00 AM
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You have created a beauty with melody of its own. Your poem goes as my favorite one dear friend Kim and thank you for visiting my earlier poem. I am working on Indian classical Music Hindi song and am trying to place them in Hindi (in English) with their English 'Version. Hope you would enjoy them. With best wishes always....Ravindra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 3:01:00 PM
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Thank you, Ravindra! My pleasure to check out your poetry!
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 4/12/2024 1:46:00 AM
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And that my sweet Kim is simply beautiful even in its simplicity. Wonderful. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 3:01:00 PM
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Thank you, Victor! Hugs ~ Kim
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 4/11/2024 2:34:00 PM
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I too love the sound of birds Kim, you say it so well, spring is here and I'm glad there are out there, thanks for the poem, be well :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 3:02:00 PM
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Thank you, Rose! Blessings!
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Silent One
Date: 4/11/2024 10:01:00 AM
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Oh this is so lovely Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 3:02:00 PM
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Thank you, Silent! xx
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/11/2024 8:48:00 AM
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Aww...so sweet little birdsongs. Precious lines Kim. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 3:02:00 PM
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Thank you, Linda! xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/11/2024 8:37:00 AM
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Love this one, Kim, It's birdy paradise!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 3:26:00 PM
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Teehee…thank, Andrea! :)
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Charles Messina
Date: 4/11/2024 4:42:00 AM
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Lovely, Kim. I too love the line- "Wee angels with harps in their wings" Great line! Charlie :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 3:29:00 PM
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Thank you, Charlie! So glad so many liked that line! :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2024 3:18:00 AM
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- Yes, it's the sound of joy... love the line : "Wee angels with harps in their wings" - Lovely poem, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 3:02:00 PM
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Thank you, Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/10/2024 11:19:00 PM
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Loved that ending! Truly... what would we do sans birdsong? It breaks my heart when people here go hunting for birds.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/11/2024 2:44:00 AM
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I can understand why! Thank you, Eileen!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/10/2024 8:29:00 PM
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'wee angels with harps in their wings' - a delicate, memorable line, Kim. And you are so right: Sans birdsong, 'saddest silence.' ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/11/2024 2:45:00 AM
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Thank you, my friend!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 4/10/2024 6:58:00 PM
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totally agree KIm, this silence would be awful and so dangerous, delicious reading
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/10/2024 8:10:00 PM
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Thank you, Yann! Always glad for your support!
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/10/2024 3:32:00 PM
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Is it a song? It could be. Such an awesome verse poem. I can feel the spring and the birds on your writing. Hugs/María
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/10/2024 8:09:00 PM
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Thank you, Maria!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/10/2024 9:33:00 AM
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"Simply birds plink, plinking paradisaically. Wee angels with harps in their wings." Love it! You get a FAV!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/10/2024 1:10:00 PM
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Thank you!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/10/2024 1:09:00 PM
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Thank you!

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