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Simply Birds

Simply birds chirp, chirping in song, belonging to a cloudy day. Simply birds plink, plinking paradisaically. Wee angels with harps in their wings. Simply my teeny, tiny forest at play. Tweets twine like ivy, inviting a smile. Simply the sweetest sound of mirth. Sans birdsong, saddest silence on earth.

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Paige Hind

Date: 4/16/2024 9:41:00 PM

Ah, yes! I loved this little piece, so sweet! xx Hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2024 4:40:00 AM

So glad you liked it. Listening to those lovely morning birds now.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/14/2024 10:23:00 AM

Your "Simply Birds" is a lovely write. I love spring & the birds sing..... Enjoy your spring day................

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 3:00:00 PM

Thank you, dear one! xx

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 4/12/2024 4:05:00 AM

You have created a beauty with melody of its own. Your poem goes as my favorite one dear friend Kim and thank you for visiting my earlier poem. I am working on Indian classical Music Hindi song and am trying to place them in Hindi (in English) with their English 'Version. Hope you would enjoy them. With best wishes always....Ravindra

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 3:01:00 PM

Thank you, Ravindra! My pleasure to check out your poetry!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/12/2024 1:46:00 AM

And that my sweet Kim is simply beautiful even in its simplicity. Wonderful. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 3:01:00 PM

Thank you, Victor! Hugs ~ Kim

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/11/2024 2:34:00 PM

I too love the sound of birds Kim, you say it so well, spring is here and I'm glad there are out there, thanks for the poem, be well :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 3:02:00 PM

Thank you, Rose! Blessings!

Silent One

Date: 4/11/2024 10:01:00 AM

Oh this is so lovely Kim..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 3:02:00 PM

Thank you, Silent! xx

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/11/2024 8:48:00 AM

Aww...so sweet little birdsongs. Precious lines Kim. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 3:02:00 PM

Thank you, Linda! xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2024 8:37:00 AM

Love this one, Kim, It's birdy paradise!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 3:26:00 PM

Teehee…thank, Andrea! :)

Charles Messina

Date: 4/11/2024 4:42:00 AM

Lovely, Kim. I too love the line- "Wee angels with harps in their wings" Great line! Charlie :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 3:29:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie! So glad so many liked that line! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/11/2024 3:18:00 AM

- Yes, it's the sound of joy... love the line : "Wee angels with harps in their wings" - Lovely poem, Kim :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2024 3:02:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/10/2024 11:19:00 PM

Loved that ending! Truly... what would we do sans birdsong? It breaks my heart when people here go hunting for birds.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/11/2024 2:44:00 AM

I can understand why! Thank you, Eileen!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/10/2024 8:29:00 PM

'wee angels with harps in their wings' - a delicate, memorable line, Kim. And you are so right: Sans birdsong, 'saddest silence.' ~ Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/11/2024 2:45:00 AM

Thank you, my friend!

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/10/2024 6:58:00 PM

totally agree KIm, this silence would be awful and so dangerous, delicious reading

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/10/2024 8:10:00 PM

Thank you, Yann! Always glad for your support!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/10/2024 4:41:00 PM

an uplifting spring poem, almost lyrical. I loved these words: Wee angels with harps in their wings. Perfectly said! hugs and blessings, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/10/2024 8:10:00 PM

Glad you liked that part! :) Hugs ~ Kim

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 4/10/2024 3:32:00 PM

Is it a song? It could be. Such an awesome verse poem. I can feel the spring and the birds on your writing. Hugs/María

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/10/2024 8:09:00 PM

Thank you, Maria!

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/10/2024 9:33:00 AM

"Simply birds plink, plinking paradisaically. Wee angels with harps in their wings." Love it! You get a FAV!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/10/2024 1:10:00 PM

Thank you!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/10/2024 1:09:00 PM

Thank you!