Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Simply Birds

Simply birds chirp, chirping in song,
belonging to a cloudy day.

Simply birds plink, plinking paradisaically.
Wee angels with harps in their wings.

Simply my teeny, tiny forest at play.
Tweets twine like ivy, inviting a smile.

Simply the sweetest sound of mirth.
Sans birdsong, saddest silence on earth.

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Paige Hind April 16, 2024 at 9:41 PM Ah, yes! I loved this little piece, so sweet! xx Hugs Kim Rodrigues April 17, 2024 at 4:40 AM So glad you liked it. Listening to those lovely morning birds now.

Paula Goldsmith April 14, 2024 at 10:23 AM Your "Simply Birds" is a lovely write. I love spring & the birds sing..... Enjoy your spring day................ Kim Rodrigues April 14, 2024 at 3:00 PM Thank you, dear one! xx

Ravindra K Kapoor April 12, 2024 at 4:05 AM You have created a beauty with melody of its own. Your poem goes as my favorite one dear friend Kim and thank you for visiting my earlier poem. I am working on Indian classical Music Hindi song and am trying to place them in Hindi (in English) with their English 'Version. Hope you would enjoy them. With best wishes always....Ravindra Kim Rodrigues April 14, 2024 at 3:01 PM Thank you, Ravindra! My pleasure to check out your poetry!

Victor Buhagiar April 12, 2024 at 1:46 AM And that my sweet Kim is simply beautiful even in its simplicity. Wonderful. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues April 14, 2024 at 3:01 PM Thank you, Victor! Hugs ~ Kim

Mystic Rose Rose April 11, 2024 at 2:34 PM I too love the sound of birds Kim, you say it so well, spring is here and I'm glad there are out there, thanks for the poem, be well :) Kim Rodrigues April 14, 2024 at 3:02 PM Thank you, Rose! Blessings!

Silent One April 11, 2024 at 10:01 AM Oh this is so lovely Kim.. Kim Rodrigues April 14, 2024 at 3:02 PM Thank you, Silent! xx

Linda Alice Fowler April 11, 2024 at 8:48 AM Aww...so sweet little birdsongs. Precious lines Kim. :) Kim Rodrigues April 14, 2024 at 3:02 PM Thank you, Linda! xx

Andrea Dietrich April 11, 2024 at 8:37 AM Love this one, Kim, It's birdy paradise! Kim Rodrigues April 14, 2024 at 3:26 PM Teehee…thank, Andrea! :)

Charles Messina April 11, 2024 at 4:42 AM Lovely, Kim. I too love the line- "Wee angels with harps in their wings" Great line! Charlie :) Kim Rodrigues April 14, 2024 at 3:29 PM Thank you, Charlie! So glad so many liked that line! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 11, 2024 at 3:18 AM - Yes, it's the sound of joy... love the line : "Wee angels with harps in their wings" - Lovely poem, Kim :) - hugs Kim Rodrigues April 14, 2024 at 3:02 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian April 10, 2024 at 11:19 PM Loved that ending! Truly... what would we do sans birdsong? It breaks my heart when people here go hunting for birds. Kim Rodrigues April 11, 2024 at 2:44 AM I can understand why! Thank you, Eileen!

Gershon Wolf April 10, 2024 at 8:29 PM 'wee angels with harps in their wings' - a delicate, memorable line, Kim. And you are so right: Sans birdsong, 'saddest silence.' ~ Gershon Kim Rodrigues April 11, 2024 at 2:45 AM Thank you, my friend!

Yann Rolland April 10, 2024 at 6:58 PM totally agree KIm, this silence would be awful and so dangerous, delicious reading Kim Rodrigues April 10, 2024 at 8:10 PM Thank you, Yann! Always glad for your support!

Maria Fernandez-Garcia April 10, 2024 at 3:32 PM Is it a song? It could be. Such an awesome verse poem. I can feel the spring and the birds on your writing. Hugs/María Kim Rodrigues April 10, 2024 at 8:09 PM Thank you, Maria!

Joseph P. DiMino April 10, 2024 at 9:33 AM "Simply birds plink, plinking paradisaically. Wee angels with harps in their wings." Love it! You get a FAV! Kim Rodrigues April 10, 2024 at 1:10 PM Thank you! Kim Rodrigues April 10, 2024 at 1:09 PM Thank you!