Simplicity-SK

Even the irrational, of a child, running for cover, losing board game, but especially in his smile, hug, snowball-kisses. The rolled-out dough, cookie cutters, little fingers sprinkling sugar. Joyful stomping of rainwater and mud, dripping onto a sparkling floor. Wiggly worms and dandelions pulled from his short pocket. The scuffed up pants as he deliriously slides into home base, and the other way around, as he zealously shouts, “You’re out!” Cleaned-up, tucked-in, fast asleep - the simplicity of an angel.
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Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 2:23 PM
Adorable. And last line sums it up so well. Congrats on the winner list
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 4:44 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Andresen Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 11:42 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 1:25 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Kendrick Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 8:07 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. The last line so special. Sara K.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 10:08 AM
Thank you, Sara! I enjoyed writing it! A mishmash of various time of grand childhood.
Mcintosh Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 5:49 AM
Absolutely adorab.le! I love this. Congrats and God bless you
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 5:57 AM
Thank you, Gina! Glad to be on the winners list.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 4:58 AM
awwww....so tender and captivating.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 5:17 AM
Thank you so much :)
George Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 11:12 PM
The simplicity of a child is striking. After a boisterous day of adventure, how fast he falls asleep.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 4:11 AM
Sure does! My grand came to visit me after field day…couldn’t keep his eyes open…lol
Hind Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 7:41 PM
Wow. Beautiful! I am going to post a similiar poem, one I wrote before I saw this. <3
Rodrigues Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 4:12 AM
Yay! Looking forward to reading it!
Croft Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 8:05 AM
Very beautiful, good luck in the contest
Rodrigues Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 4:12 AM
Thanks, Karen!
DiMino Avatar
May 22, 2026 at 10:35 PM
Sooooo beautiful! You get a FAV!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 4:17 AM
I so appreciate you, Joe! Thank you!
Onclaud Avatar
May 22, 2026 at 7:57 PM
that stage of childhood where everything is innocent and pure... you delight, kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 4:17 AM
Thank you, Nette <3
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