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Photo of flowers in my yard, but a little blurry from the breeze.

Simplicity

Small, simple flowers bright as can be
Weaving in and out of the breeze
Turning a moment into full simplicity
As I walk under the cover of green trees

I realize, you only have to stop to look
Some things in life are clear, simple, right
Just as the small flowers or the clear brook
Quiet simplicity, will bring answers to light

Heidi Sands

7/16/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/27/2022 7:03:00 AM
Heidi, Thanks for looking in on my work! I am very much enjoying your work too . This one in particlar spoke to me. Very well written!
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Date: 10/27/2022 7:06:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment and you are welcome :)
Date: 8/18/2021 2:33:00 PM
Thank you for celebrating the quiet joy of flowers.
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Date: 8/18/2021 2:35:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment David and you are welcome :)
Date: 7/17/2021 1:03:00 PM
Your poetry is so inspirational Heidi. I enjoyed this peaceful poem. Congratulations on having your poetry featured. Blessings Connie xxoo
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Date: 7/18/2021 5:05:00 AM
Hi Connie. It is so nice to hear from you. I have been thinking about you. Thank you for your kind comment on this. Blessings! :)
Date: 8/21/2020 8:24:00 AM
Heidi, 'Photo of flowers in my yard, but a little blurry from the breeze.' A piece of time and light captured from your path. I'll try to stop more and really look. -Richard
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Date: 8/21/2020 9:32:00 AM
Hi Richard. Thank you for your visit to this one. It is nice to see your comment. I appreciate it and I hope all is well :)
Date: 4/8/2018 12:16:00 PM
The simplicity of the moment contrasted against the complexity of nature. My all time favorite subject is nature.
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Date: 4/8/2018 12:27:00 PM
Thank you Tim. I love nature too :)
Date: 3/21/2018 8:20:00 PM
I really like this poem! We should all stop to smell the flowers.
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Date: 3/21/2018 8:24:00 PM
Thank you P.M. I am happy to hear you like this one :)
Date: 8/1/2017 11:46:00 AM
Simple yes but so sublime. Congrats on POTD Heidi!
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Date: 8/1/2017 12:48:00 PM
Thank you so much John! :)
Date: 7/24/2017 12:49:00 AM
Simplicity of these flowers often remind us of how complex we make our life. Beautiful writing. Congrats on potd. :)
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Date: 7/24/2017 5:00:00 AM
Yes, that can be true Sunita. I wanted to bring the simplicity to others. Thank you very much :)
Date: 7/19/2017 9:09:00 AM
Hello Heidi, Congratulations on POTD here!! Your title with this rhyme says it all: "Simplicity." The flowers from your attached picture in your yard readily complement your verse as well. This one's a refreshing and uplifting write for sure. And A FAVE!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 7/19/2017 9:13:00 AM
Hi Gary. Thank you for taking the time to visit this one and for the congrats! I thought the flowers fit the simplicity I enjoy and strive for too. I appreciate your feedback very much. and the FAVE! :) I am so happy you like it :)
Date: 7/19/2017 5:44:00 AM
I read it twice, I enjoyed it. Writing is like going to war with words, the battle infinite. I took it apart for how it works for me. Loved it. Hope, Love, and humility, vs Greed, power, deception, and vanity, which almost all mankind suffer from. Well done!
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Date: 7/19/2017 5:48:00 AM
Hi Klio. Thank you for your visit and I am so happy you could see it like this. Have a wonderful day. Thank you :)
Date: 7/19/2017 4:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being honored with Poem of the day Heidi! : )
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Date: 7/19/2017 4:14:00 AM
I appreciate you taking the time to comment on this Connie. Thank you :) Have a nice day.
Date: 7/19/2017 2:23:00 AM
Congrats!!! On POTD Heidi...very well crafted my friend...*WW*
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Date: 7/19/2017 4:14:00 AM
Thank you for the kind feedback and congrats...WW
Date: 7/18/2017 11:34:00 PM
A beautiful poem for POTD, Heidi! Congrats to you
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Date: 7/19/2017 4:13:00 AM
Thank you so much White Wolf :)
Date: 7/18/2017 10:04:00 PM
This is sweetly simple and simply charming, Heidi:) congratulations on POTD:)
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Date: 7/19/2017 4:11:00 AM
Thank you Jo Daniel :) That makes me happy
Date: 7/18/2017 9:48:00 PM
Congrats on your POTD Heidi, well done and well written. I was wanting to be one of the first to return your compliment of a few days ago on ' The Race' - which was the first, but Murphy's law struck and we had a power failure. It's winter in Oz and lucky it was night was able to keep warm in bed. I love those little daisies they are so delicately pretty and are a lovely ground cover...Maria
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Date: 7/19/2017 4:13:00 AM
Hi Maria. Thank you so much . Winter?? I am sorry to hear about the power failure. I am happy you love the little daisies. :)
Date: 7/18/2017 6:21:00 PM
a simple poem full of imagery We only have to look around us and be blessed by small things.
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Date: 7/18/2017 6:23:00 PM
Yes, that's true Vivien. We only have to look around us and be blessed by the small things . Thank you for your kind comment :)
Date: 7/18/2017 5:31:00 PM
That was an amazing poem! Congrats:)
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Date: 7/18/2017 5:33:00 PM
That is nice of you to say. Thanks Bella :)
Date: 7/18/2017 4:43:00 PM
Beautiful, nothing better than being quiet in nature. Congratulations Heidi on POTD.
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Date: 7/18/2017 4:44:00 PM
So true Elizabeth. Thank you for your visit to congratulate me. :) I am happy you like it.
Date: 7/18/2017 3:52:00 PM
Well done here & on potd.'
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Date: 7/18/2017 3:53:00 PM
Thank you for visiting here to tell me this Joe :) I appreciate it!
Date: 7/18/2017 2:04:00 PM
A simple poem on a simple subject aimed at a simpleton like me. Simply wonderful! - Dean And Congratulations on POTD honors!
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Date: 7/18/2017 2:42:00 PM
Simple is great Dean! Thank you for coming by to congratulate me. I appreciate all your support :)
Date: 7/18/2017 1:27:00 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely p.o.t.d., Heidi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/18/2017 1:29:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to stop by and congratulate me on this simple poem Sunshine :)
Date: 7/18/2017 11:55:00 AM
Lovely Heidi, Congratulations on PotD!!
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Date: 7/18/2017 12:36:00 PM
Thank you Darren. I appreciate your kindness to me :)
Date: 7/18/2017 9:33:00 AM
Back again to say Congratulations!
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Date: 7/18/2017 9:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Sunlite :)
Date: 7/18/2017 7:55:00 AM
Beautiful write Heidi...Congrats on POTD
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Date: 7/18/2017 8:07:00 AM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate all your kindness and support :)
Date: 7/18/2017 7:53:00 AM
Simply beautiful Miss Heidi, and congrats on potd... hugs :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/18/2017 8:07:00 AM
Thank you so much for all your kind support Akkina! Have a nice day today. :)
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