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Simple Unoccupied Bench

The simple bench sits Unoccupied now Classic table holds Intent to write poems Correspondences Light sweater blown Onto yellow Roses, walkway Empty no one Garden neat Perfect plants Fenced closed Where is....... Empty Bench ("The Bench"(The Garden Of Versailles) Edouard Manet (1832-1883/French) Oil On Canvas)

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Date: 6/21/2010 5:41:00 AM
So pristine and simple and right! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 6/9/2010 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Picture This" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2010 9:10:00 PM
Hey, congratulations, SAra!! I bet I may have seen this painting before but can't recall now! Luv, andrea
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Date: 6/7/2010 12:28:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your HM in Brian's Picture This contest with this wonderful write and inspirational piece to work from for your entry.. always pleasant to read your poetry.. with luv.. Linda-Marie.. enjoy your honor..
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Date: 6/3/2010 9:06:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Sara.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/20/2010 6:51:00 AM
Sara, i have to admire your courage to write in so many forms >> another lovely Diminished Hexaverse >> James
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Date: 2/20/2010 4:38:00 AM
It's under my big oak tree! LOL Practice makes perfect. You have written many very nice diminished hexaverse poems. Smiles. Have a great day. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 2/17/2010 5:51:00 PM
another hidden meaning? the 'perfect' is all there. but we don't know its there. but theres more! geez Sara, i love these THINK poems of yours!(:
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Date: 2/15/2010 7:45:00 PM
A lovely poem and good luck if u entered in the current contest posted.. a great content and a wonderful image of poets and writers alike... enjoyed this one ..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 2/15/2010 6:29:00 PM
Awesome Hexaverse, Sara. I may try one of these soon. Sincere, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/15/2010 12:07:00 PM
I enjoyed that, thanks
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Date: 2/15/2010 11:05:00 AM
YOU GOT ME ON THAT POEM. I CAN VISUALIZE THE SWEATER,AND THE YELLOW ROSES THE EMPTY BENCH.. ARE YOU IN YOUR OWN GARDEN. WHERE YOU LIKE TO WRITE...POETRY......GOOD WRITE..I.T.
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Date: 2/15/2010 10:00:00 AM
enjoyed reading
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Date: 2/15/2010 8:08:00 AM
You set this scene beautifully, Sara! Well done! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/15/2010 7:35:00 AM
Very nicely done. You paint so very well. I believe in the "forces of nature". I enjoy all and let a feeling of wellness come over me when I am able. I believe this is the result of evolved brain chemistry--but admit I could be wrong. I have sense that you are very kind.
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Date: 2/15/2010 5:16:00 AM
Beautiful Sara just beautiful Daniel
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Date: 2/15/2010 4:31:00 AM
From:(The Garden of Versailes) by Edouard Manet(l832-1883/French) Oil on Canvas. Great painting which brings questions to one's mind. Just a little info to help one understand. Sara
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