Sara Kendrick Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Simple Unoccupied Bench

The simple bench sits
Unoccupied now
Classic table holds
Intent to write poems
Correspondences

Light sweater blown
Onto yellow
Roses, walkway
Empty no one

Garden neat
Perfect plants
Fenced closed

Where is.......
Empty

Bench

("The Bench"(The Garden Of Versailles) Edouard Manet (1832-1883/French) Oil On Canvas)

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Debbie Guzzi June 21, 2010 at 5:41 AM So pristine and simple and right! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown June 9, 2010 at 6:27 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Picture This" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2010 at 9:10 PM Hey, congratulations, SAra!! I bet I may have seen this painting before but can't recall now! Luv, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 7, 2010 at 12:28 PM Congrats Sara on your HM in Brian's Picture This contest with this wonderful write and inspirational piece to work from for your entry.. always pleasant to read your poetry.. with luv.. Linda-Marie.. enjoy your honor..

Brian Strand June 3, 2010 at 9:06 AM Thank you for supporting my contest Sara.Rgds Brian

James Fraser February 20, 2010 at 6:51 AM Sara, i have to admire your courage to write in so many forms >> another lovely Diminished Hexaverse >> James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen February 20, 2010 at 4:38 AM It's under my big oak tree! LOL Practice makes perfect. You have written many very nice diminished hexaverse poems. Smiles. Have a great day. Lovingly, Dane

Lynette Chachere February 17, 2010 at 5:51 PM another hidden meaning? the 'perfect' is all there. but we don't know its there. but theres more! geez Sara, i love these THINK poems of yours!(:

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 15, 2010 at 7:45 PM A lovely poem and good luck if u entered in the current contest posted.. a great content and a wonderful image of poets and writers alike... enjoyed this one ..luv.. Linda-Marie

John Freeman February 15, 2010 at 6:29 PM Awesome Hexaverse, Sara. I may try one of these soon. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Susan Palli February 15, 2010 at 12:07 PM I enjoyed that, thanks

Skat A February 15, 2010 at 11:05 AM YOU GOT ME ON THAT POEM. I CAN VISUALIZE THE SWEATER,AND THE YELLOW ROSES THE EMPTY BENCH.. ARE YOU IN YOUR OWN GARDEN. WHERE YOU LIKE TO WRITE...POETRY......GOOD WRITE..I.T.

Doris Culverhouse February 15, 2010 at 10:00 AM enjoyed reading

Carrie Richards February 15, 2010 at 8:08 AM You set this scene beautifully, Sara! Well done! ~ Carrie

Duke Beaufort February 15, 2010 at 7:35 AM Very nicely done. You paint so very well. I believe in the "forces of nature". I enjoy all and let a feeling of wellness come over me when I am able. I believe this is the result of evolved brain chemistry--but admit I could be wrong. I have sense that you are very kind.

Daniel Cheeseman February 15, 2010 at 5:16 AM Beautiful Sara just beautiful Daniel

Sara Kendrick February 15, 2010 at 4:31 AM From:(The Garden of Versailes) by Edouard Manet(l832-1883/French) Oil on Canvas. Great painting which brings questions to one's mind. Just a little info to help one understand. Sara