Simple Pleasures

Three waves blew past 
My two arms stretched wide
With one word in my head: Haven!
And to you alone shall I confide

The tide brought a whisper to my ear
"A simple pleasure I give to you, my dear" 

An uphill steep each man is forced to climb
And atop that mount is a rare moment of daze
When you glimpse your Pain lamenting below
And feel the breeze brushing at your face

Empty your mind but don't shut it close
To the simple pleasures under the mountain's nose

The rigors of life may yet sink you low
Deep down away from the starlit skies
But twirling and curling in the open meadow
Are vivid blossoms pleasing to thy eyes

Down in the velds also, that beautiful haze
These simple pleasures often elude my days 

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January, 20th 2016
Contest: Simple Pleasures
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
Awarded 5th place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Fleming Avatar
January 10, 2017 at 10:47 PM
I can deeply empathize with the central theme of your poem, Wilfred. You either feel it - Or you do not...Most do not! Eloquently expressed...A joy to read! My warmest regards. :) john
Aniagyei Avatar
January 11, 2017 at 3:33 AM
Simple musings, things we crave for.
Kendrick Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 3:28 PM
Congrats on your winning work.Way to go. I enjoyed reading it..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Aniagyei Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 3:14 AM
Thanks for reading, Sara!
A   Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 1:01 AM
Wilfred, I was reading your comments below... Thank you for the reply to my old comment. LINDA
Aniagyei Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 12:41 AM
You're always welcome, Linda!!!
A   Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 10:09 PM
you are welcome.
A   Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 3:17 AM
Wilfred, Congrats on your wonderful win. ~LINDA~
Aniagyei Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:47 AM
Thanks, Linda!
Sergi Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 7:47 AM
Hi Wilfred; nice to know you. Great poetic expression which is a simple pleasure. Congratulations on your win.
Aniagyei Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:48 AM
Thank you, Ralph..... Great to know you too!
A. Sharma Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:07 AM
What a pleasure to read Wilfred.. congrats on big win!
Aniagyei Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 2:27 AM
Thanks, Doc!
Gentry Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 2:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this awesome poem!
Aniagyei Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Thank you, Susan!
A  Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 12:03 AM
WILFRED, Congrats on your Simple Pleasure win. Hugs ** SKAT **
Aniagyei Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 11:29 AM
Thank you, SKAT..... I'm honored
Merryman Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 4:31 PM
Beautiful imagery and creatively written! Wilfred, congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for participating! Love, Kim
Aniagyei Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 11:30 AM
Thank you, Kim! You hosted an inspiring contest that birthed many great writes, Congrats yourself!
Trifiatis Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 2:02 PM
Yes, Wilfred, have spent years up the mountains and down the valleys! Nature and I are pals!
Aniagyei Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 10:42 AM
You've dwelt with simple pleasures!! Good for you, Demetrios! .......For this do we pray
Nunez Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 9:05 AM
Loved this simple pleasure, Wilfred. Your imagery is great! Not familiar with "veld"...thank you for adding a new word to my bank.
Aniagyei Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Thank you too, Kim!!! The pleasure is all mine!
Trifiatis Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 7:36 AM
When someone lives close to nature, nature whispers to him all its secrets and this creates a harmonious bond that people of the city fail to understand! Beautiful and lively poem, dear Wilfred!
Aniagyei Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 11:18 AM
Sounds like you've lived through this feeling, Demetrios! Thank you!
Campbell Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 8:32 PM
Wilfred, this is just so lovely. Don't shut it close. Fabulous. Definitely a 7.
Aniagyei Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 4:26 AM
Thank you, Robyn....... Waiting on your sonnet! lol
A   Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 12:30 PM
beautiful write Willfred, enjoyed:)
Aniagyei Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 12:42 PM
Thank you, Linda!! enjoyed your, 'Guess who' too...
Morris Brady Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 7:52 AM
Wonderful! 'The tide brought a whisper to my ear' 'simple pleasures under the mountains nose' I like the SO MUCH
Aniagyei Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 7:55 AM
Liked it too..... Thanks for your lovely comment, Chrissie!
Lane Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 7:36 AM
Very nicely expressed, Wilfred.
Aniagyei Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 7:48 AM
Thank you, Lin!!
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