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Heaven to me is purely this After a long and stressful day Deep bubble bath, oh such pure bliss Just need to melt my cares away In foaming oils I love to lay Scent of lavender will arise Ease my tension and tired sore eyes Wrap in a warm fluffy towel Simple pleasures will be my prize Drift to sleep, not be a night owl 01~31~15 Contest Dizain Me – Dr Ram Mehta How many syllables used - each line is 8 syllables ~awarded 3rd place~

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Skat A

Date: 2/15/2015 10:41:00 AM

Jan ~ Congratulations on the win. It's an honor to read every poem In Dr Ram's DAZAIN ME contest. *Skat LOVE*

Jan Allison
Date: 2/15/2015 10:57:00 AM

Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2015 10:51:00 PM

So glad he scored you high for your unique theme, Jan. BIG congrats to you in this contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2015 2:19:00 AM

Thanks Andrea :-) Hugs Jan xx

Grace Mutindi

Date: 2/5/2015 5:42:00 AM

A fun way of presenting Heaven Jan, congrats!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/5/2015 9:35:00 AM

Thanks so much Grace:-) Hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/3/2015 2:55:00 PM

Hi Jan, stopping back to congratulate your on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2015 2:57:00 PM

Thanks so much Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/3/2015 1:58:00 PM

Ahhh, serene and I enjoy the experience as you do..congrats. BG

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2015 2:11:00 PM

I should be living in the bath Barbara - I need to chill as much as possible at the moment :-( hugs Jan xx

Earl Schumacker

Date: 2/3/2015 10:26:00 AM

Hi Jan, Very nice accomplishment. Great job. Very tranquil and relaxing. Congratulations on your win. Here is something that rhymes with heaven....A 7. You and the poem deserve that designated rating. Have a wonderful day. Earl

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2015 10:35:00 AM

Thanks so much Earl I do appreciate your support:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 2/3/2015 10:22:00 AM

Congrats on your win Jan...

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2015 10:34:00 AM

Thanks for your support Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 2/3/2015 8:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem, Jan, beautiful write a 7. I miss my resttime in the bath tub. xoxox Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2015 10:34:00 AM

I could live there at the moment Eve - wash all my troubles away:-( Hugs Jan xx

Mohan Chutani

Date: 2/3/2015 8:40:00 AM

simple heaven that melts all cares away. congrats Jan. Mohan

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2015 10:33:00 AM

You have hit the nail on the head Mohan:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shane Cooper

Date: 2/3/2015 7:55:00 AM

Hi Jan, congrats on the win. It is a great poem. love Shane

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2015 10:32:00 AM

Thanks Shane I need to live in my bath then my bed at the moment:-( Hugs jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/3/2015 7:36:00 AM

Congrats on your win Jan>God bless>rajat

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2015 10:32:00 AM

Thanks Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Poesy Relish

Date: 2/3/2015 7:18:00 AM

dropping by with congrats on your win Jan.. lov, nad!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2015 10:31:00 AM

Thanks so much Nadiya:-) hugs jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/3/2015 5:26:00 AM

Thanks for participating in my contest and congrats on the win, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2015 6:26:00 AM

Thank you Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan x

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/2/2015 5:50:00 AM

sure is bliss jan nice to like back soaking excellent pen dear pal

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2015 7:59:00 AM

Thanks Liam:-) hugs Jan x

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 2/2/2015 5:52:00 AM

meant lay back not like sorry for typo

James Fraser

Date: 2/1/2015 3:16:00 PM

Beautiful bliss Jan, nothing beats a good soak, hugs, James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2015 3:21:00 PM

Oh I agree James with the stress I've been under i should never get out of it lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/1/2015 1:14:00 AM

ah yes pure bliss as you say Jan excellent pen gl in contest hugs 7 fav

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2015 5:08:00 AM

Thanks so much Shadow:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 1/31/2015 4:57:00 PM

I like the way you altered your previous write, Jan; you lost none of the blissful hot bubble bath effect in the process! hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 1/31/2015 5:53:00 PM

Thanks Paul I prefer the original poem but it didn't fit the form so thought I would rewrite it to fit the form - that was a real challenge! Hugs jan xxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/31/2015 3:13:00 AM

wow cozy refreshing and totally relaxing.. :)! indeed there are pieces of heaven here on earth.. :)! --olive eloisa and all hugs for you!. :) Happy weekend.. :)!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/31/2015 5:24:00 AM

Thanks so much Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/30/2015 9:52:00 PM

A heavenly write, Jan!! I love a bubble bath. Add a 1 hour full massage...it doesn't get much better...this is wonderful for the Heaven contest and would work for the indulgence contest, too...have a blessed weekend. Hugs, Rhonda

Jan Allison
Date: 1/31/2015 5:23:00 AM

My hour aromatherapy sessions I have via hospice are absolutely amazing - if I could then have a bubble bath and great straight into bed and sleep - would be absolute heaven - I may suggest it to them lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2015 9:00:00 PM

this is REALLY good, JAn, how you fit it to that rhyme scheme. I know you were saying not that great but I disagree!! it is a great one you did for his contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/31/2015 5:22:00 AM

Thanks Andrea I did find the rhyme scheme difficult but gave it my best shot:-) Hugs Jan x

Shane Cooper

Date: 1/30/2015 8:19:00 PM

My gentle friend You have produced a great poem. I see that this form of poetry suits you. To be able to produce a poem and then write it in totally different forms of poetry with each being a wonderful poem shows true artistic talent. Love Shane xxx

Shane Cooper
Date: 1/31/2015 5:37:00 AM

I withdrew my poem from the comp and have just finished a new attempt that is actually a disain and have deleted it accidentally just not meant to be I suppose Do not believe that for a moment that you struggled. Your poems flow from the heart which means they can encompass the world. Love Shane xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/31/2015 5:21:00 AM

I struggled with this one Shane - need to live in my bath forever at the moment:-( Hugs Jan x