'simp'-Pathetic

Naive in my ways, I always seem to fall for the same "vixen", You know the type, Short, thick, fair skinned beauties from the land of milk and honey, that just happen to be in a relationship, Naive in my ways, I always seem to fall for her simplistic "deception", You know the type, "I love you, I miss you, I never want to lose you", all in a seductive way that send my common sense to sleep, . . . Pathetic in my old ways, I always seemed to love her even when she hurt my pride, Even when it hurt my heart, I always seemed to let her get away with it.

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Camila Encarnacion

Date: 6/18/2023 10:04:00 PM

Hey , I like this poem because it gives me avant- garde vibes . Glad you are ok .

Daniel Stretch Simbuliani
Date: 7/10/2023 5:00:00 AM

Thanks, I was lowkey in my feels when I wrote it and really wanted to use an unconventional but dynamic writing style to express it

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/7/2023 10:15:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Daniel Stretch Simbuliani
Date: 6/9/2023 1:19:00 AM

Thanks for the positive vibes Ms Agustin, I wish you the best in your endeavors. And after perusing through your fine work, I must say, I'm fairly impressed