Silver Strands

When I first found the silver strands, I felt a jab of fear. Would ugly age spots follow soon, wrinkles and failing ear? My dark locks were my pride and joy. I didn't want to lose them. I glared at offending silver strands, with no thought to excuse them. My vanity would not allow these derelicts to stay. I gave each one a painful yank, for treason they would pay. Just for sheer spite they started multiplying very fast. I knew I had to change my ways or my tresses wouldn't last. With despair my tired beautician said, "It's either do or dye." And with ego trumping common sense we gave the dye a try. My family bet each week on just what shade my hair would be As I fought the aging battle with a brave duplicity. My daughter thought it funny when an unsuspecting Mister Tried just a bit to flirt with me and mistook me for her sister. But now she finds no humor in it, in any way or another, For since she's let her hair turn gray, he thinks she is my mother won 8th in contest

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Date: 12/13/2011 6:47:00 PM
This is cute, Joyce. Congrats on your win. Kim
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Date: 12/12/2011 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations joyce on your win.Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 12/12/2011 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Silver Strands" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/12/2011 7:56:00 AM
LOL. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 12/12/2011 5:55:00 AM
well, we should wear it as a badge of honor! Thank you for your kind words Joyce I hope all is well happy holy days! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 12/11/2011 10:15:00 PM
Joyce,I had found yours to be just about the funniest of all the humorous ones I read. It's so fun to go thru the list and see which poets wrote these poems that Susan and I judged. I especially liked the last few stanzas. It reminds me when I was helping my daughter buy her wedding dress and people were asking me if I was her sister. (she did not like that at all!!) Congratulations on your win. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/11/2011 8:34:00 PM
Joyce this great i think it deserved a higher place x
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Date: 12/11/2011 5:05:00 PM
Joyce, Joyce....this is so cute I would have put it much higher in the list of winners, but I can understand what a difficult choice they must have had judging this contest because there were so many really wonderful entries. I found this poem delightful. I have an identical twin sister someone once mistook for my mother. She was incensed to say the least. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/11/2011 2:21:00 PM
A very humorous piece Joyce. Enjoyed it. Congratulations
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Date: 12/11/2011 1:59:00 PM
Joyce congrats on your win, don't worry you look as pretty as a picture..David
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Date: 12/3/2011 5:20:00 PM
Love it Joyce-you go girl! Much luck to you in the contest :)
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Date: 12/3/2011 12:01:00 PM
Wonderful Joyce, good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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