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Silver Haiku

frost carpets the lawn
on the doormat, a snail leaves
a gift of silver

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Carolyn Devonshire

January 23, 2011 at 5:41 PM

A delightful image -- seing the frost as a gift of silver. Beautiful haiku, Eiken! Love, Carolyn

Christine A Kysely

January 20, 2011 at 12:52 PM

Very nice write! Christine :))

Caryl Muzzey

January 19, 2011 at 1:03 PM

A beautiful write! I enjoyed the read. Caryl

James Peranteau

January 19, 2011 at 1:55 AM

A perfect Haiku dear poet ! Visual memories of summer mornings, I love it !much love, james

Andrea Dietrich

January 18, 2011 at 7:45 PM

BEautiful imagery, Eieken. just beautiful.

James Fraser

January 18, 2011 at 12:14 PM

Nice one Eiken comparing the trail of the snail to silver....:)

Diane Locksley

January 18, 2011 at 11:49 AM

Nice job with your haiku, Eiken. If this is for the contest, good luck. Best to you, Diane

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 18, 2011 at 8:23 AM

Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry Eiken. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today and I hope you will continue to write. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol