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Silver Haiku

frost carpets the lawn on the doormat, a snail leaves a gift of silver

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/23/2011 5:41:00 PM

A delightful image -- seing the frost as a gift of silver. Beautiful haiku, Eiken! Love, Carolyn

Christine A Kysely

Date: 1/20/2011 12:52:00 PM

Very nice write! Christine :))

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 1/19/2011 1:03:00 PM

A beautiful write! I enjoyed the read. Caryl

James Peranteau

Date: 1/19/2011 1:55:00 AM

A perfect Haiku dear poet ! Visual memories of summer mornings, I love it !much love, james

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2011 7:45:00 PM

BEautiful imagery, Eieken. just beautiful.

James Fraser

Date: 1/18/2011 12:14:00 PM

Nice one Eiken comparing the trail of the snail to silver....:)

Diane Locksley

Date: 1/18/2011 11:49:00 AM

Nice job with your haiku, Eiken. If this is for the contest, good luck. Best to you, Diane

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/18/2011 8:23:00 AM

Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry Eiken. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today and I hope you will continue to write. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/18/2011 7:41:00 AM

Very keen sense of observation you have penned so well with great images, Eiken

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/18/2011 5:57:00 AM

This is lovely, nicely written, good luck

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/18/2011 5:33:00 AM

Very well written Eiken .. nice imagery full of vibrant tones.. good luck in the contest my friend..with luv..