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Silver Falls

silver falls
        rainbows splash my face
awakening me
      to a mottled brown snail
sliding along the wet rail 
leaving tiny silvery  paths

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Andrea Dietrich

July 9, 2015 at 3:59 PM

What is YOUR horoscope? It seems subdued and not fiery! I was very quiet and reserved as a child and I still love being by myself, just forced myself to get out of my shell as I got older.That is probably why you took me for Leo!

Andrea Dietrich

July 9, 2015 at 3:58 PM

what a beautiful way to describe this kind of creepy happening with the snail. Love it (by the way, I am not Leo. I am double earth sign: virgo with moon in Taurus, though my moon kind of borders with ARies.Maybe that is where you are seeing the "fire" in me. Orange is not a color i like very much. I prefer yellow and lilac /lavender colors, however, I think given the four personality choices yellow/orange/red/green, the description for orange did describe me best.