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Silver Birds

Planes roar down runways

     Silver birds attack the skies

       ~ Riders lost in dreams

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Bill Baker

July 5, 2022 at 1:23 PM

Engaging Haiku, Gershon. Bill

Line Gauthier

July 4, 2022 at 8:41 PM

wow ~ love this poem

Evelyn Judy Buehler

July 4, 2022 at 7:12 PM

A wonderful, 'uplifting' haiku. The imagery is gorgeous!

Valsa George

July 2, 2022 at 8:39 PM

This is a wonderful haiku, Gershon !

Gershon Wolf

July 3, 2022 at 6:17 PM

Appreciate your kind words, Valsa. Happiness and Joy, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith

July 1, 2022 at 1:26 PM

Room for one more??? I need a trip. Any place will do. Just take me away, far, far away. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................

Gershon Wolf

July 4, 2022 at 11:09 AM

So, Paula, how did you know that I was a travel agent -- emphasis on the first three letters of agent. lol. Ain't we got fun?! Happy Fourth to you!

Paula Goldsmith

July 4, 2022 at 8:23 AM

The Land of Poetry Soup sounds lovely/fun. Please, I want a beach room. What if I want a one way ticket??? Guess you are now my travel agent. Hahahaha

Gershon Wolf

July 3, 2022 at 6:19 PM

Tell you what: I'll book you for a round-trip ticket to the Land of Poetry Soup. lol. You said 'any place will do!' :)