Silver Birds

Planes roar down runways Silver birds attack the skies ~ Riders lost in dreams

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/5/2022 1:23:00 PM

Engaging Haiku, Gershon. Bill

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/4/2022 8:41:00 PM

wow ~ love this poem

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/4/2022 7:12:00 PM

A wonderful, 'uplifting' haiku. The imagery is gorgeous!

Valsa George

Date: 7/2/2022 8:39:00 PM

This is a wonderful haiku, Gershon !

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/3/2022 6:17:00 PM

Appreciate your kind words, Valsa. Happiness and Joy, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/1/2022 1:26:00 PM

Room for one more??? I need a trip. Any place will do. Just take me away, far, far away. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/4/2022 11:09:00 AM

So, Paula, how did you know that I was a travel agent -- emphasis on the first three letters of agent. lol. Ain't we got fun?! Happy Fourth to you!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/4/2022 8:23:00 AM

The Land of Poetry Soup sounds lovely/fun. Please, I want a beach room. What if I want a one way ticket??? Guess you are now my travel agent. Hahahaha

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/3/2022 6:19:00 PM

Tell you what: I'll book you for a round-trip ticket to the Land of Poetry Soup. lol. You said 'any place will do!' :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/1/2022 9:35:00 AM

Such flights are more flexible, in control of the owner operator. Excellent snapshot my friend!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/1/2022 9:08:00 AM

Marvelous haiku, gw. I was racing down the runway with you.