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Silly Soliloquy

In the first place without a second thought down at the pub on third street your prejudice shines forth. When ever you partake of that fifth one doesn’t need a sixth sense to know you’re not in seventh heaven. If you were a cat you’d be on number eight of the nine lives you had already wasted. Bob, if I’ve told you once, I’ve told you ten, Try to control this impetuous pen!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/12/2011 7:24:00 PM
Every so often a special verse entices to visit again. This one sure entertains. :)
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Date: 8/18/2011 10:42:00 PM
back to this one. It really is great, Robert.
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Date: 8/15/2011 1:11:00 AM
lol! wow~ always, Robert. How are you? Me i'm just stopping by to say hi and catch up on some of my reading. Love the meaning one can give another when it comes to reading poetry. Have yourself a wonderful evening. God bless & take care,..Linda
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Date: 8/11/2011 11:53:00 PM
this is awesome, BOB!!!!
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Date: 8/11/2011 12:14:00 PM
What an amazing verse with the story going through the numbers. So clever to enjoy.
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Date: 8/8/2011 10:46:00 PM
Ah, so clever, Rob. Love the way you worked in all the numbers and made a great point as well. But please let your impetuous pen write on, my friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/8/2011 4:20:00 PM
Why would you want to control such a witty pen?? It is quite enjoyable to read, trust me ;-) love Wilma
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Date: 8/8/2011 2:22:00 PM
a very clever and enjoyabe piece of fine poetry. thank you for commenting on Under the Stars and for your advice on my back.
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Date: 8/8/2011 12:48:00 PM
LOL, very witty piece, my friend : )
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Date: 8/8/2011 1:01:00 AM
Your pen is best left uncontrolled. I like your construct of this poem; and I tried for a clever 'eleven' for you, but couldn't.
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Date: 8/7/2011 9:55:00 PM
Cheers! Voluptuously. Diggin' Bob outa control (very smart)
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Date: 8/7/2011 9:54:00 PM
Great write mate witty and true...with love..old Jack
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