Eileen Manassian Poet Rhyme

Silly Lines For Mr Green In Helter Skelter Rhyme

GREEN eyes with flecks of honey
Bright smiles that make days sunny
Warm hugs from you, my bunny
Kisses that are so yummy!!!

Others are GREEN with envy
Cause you are oh, so trendy	
You drive me in your Bentley
Your touch brings me to frenzy

You are the best apple GREEN
One bite and I am a queen
Your love explodes on the scene
Oh, GREEN boy, where have you been?

G racious and gorgeous are you
R acy and rambunctious too
E dible down to the core
E xciting, you give me more
N aughty but nice, MR GREEN,
THE BEST GREEN, I've ever seen!!!!!!!!!!!!


March 23, 2014
PD's Contest
Anything GREEN

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Connie Marcum Wong April 9, 2014 at 8:52 PM Congratulations on your wonderful win Eileen. I am a bit late, but that is the way it goes when g.daughter is a priority. Smile.

Joyce Johnson April 1, 2014 at 5:44 PM Nicely done. Love, Joyce

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl April 1, 2014 at 2:23 AM Hi clever and deserving of congratulations love xx Eileen Manassian April 1, 2014 at 2:25 AM Mandy!! Thanks for the visit and sweet words. hugs

Dr.Ram Mehta April 1, 2014 at 1:54 AM Wonderful take on the green theme, congrats on the fine win, eileen Eileen Manassian April 1, 2014 at 2:26 AM Thank you, Dr Ram. I appreciate you visit.

Poet Destroyer A March 31, 2014 at 9:35 PM HELLO FOREVER SWEET EILEEN, CONGRATULATIONS.....LINDA Eileen Manassian April 1, 2014 at 2:48 AM PD!!! Thank you, my dear. I always do well with you, and am forever grateful! Hugs

Richard Lamoureux March 24, 2014 at 9:16 AM Ha ha, this is great, you filled the screen with green! Eileen Manassian April 1, 2014 at 2:49 AM I did, didn't I? Thanks ever so much, Richard.

Donna Jones March 23, 2014 at 10:55 PM Ahhh...I liked it...made me smile..just before closing my eyes for sleep..night sweetie. Eileen Manassian April 1, 2014 at 2:49 AM Thanks for visiting my silly green poem, MD. You are a dear!!! Hugs

Tim Smith March 23, 2014 at 6:57 PM I love what you did here Eileen. The green "Granny Smith" apple is my favorite....Tim Eileen Manassian April 1, 2014 at 2:51 AM OH...yup. Granny Smith is yummy yummy! Thanks for the visit, Tim. Sorry I'm so late with my reply.

Andrea Dietrich March 23, 2014 at 6:56 PM It may be silly but it's a really cute way to do the green contest. Just who IS this delectable Mr. Green? I remember a Mr. Green Jeans in Captain Kangeroo. That went off the air when I was just out of high school! Eileen Manassian April 1, 2014 at 2:53 AM Oh Andrea....now you wouldn't want me to tell, would you? Where, then, is the mystery? Teasing you, sweetie...Hugs

Honestly J.T. March 23, 2014 at 5:20 PM Well done. I like the versatility in your lines -JT Eileen Manassian April 1, 2014 at 2:54 AM JT...heard your voice on Drake's show. Loved the way you read the poem, my dear. Beautiful. Thanks for visiting this silly poem of mine. Hugs

Paul Callus March 23, 2014 at 3:40 PM Hi Eileen! Another eye-catching avatar:) This witty poem shows a good sense of humour..another side to you. Simple, easy flowing, adequate rhyme...a mixture of 2 forms. I enjoyed it! bet it was fun to write :) // paul Eileen Manassian March 23, 2014 at 3:45 PM Thanks, Paul. ;-) Humour isn't my strong point, but now and again....I like to dabble in it. Glad you enjoyed this write. Thanks for the visit.

Nette Onclaud March 23, 2014 at 2:51 PM how creative of you to turn this page into the best of green, eileen... engaging!.. is that a new avatar?.. gorgeous!.. huggs Eileen Manassian March 23, 2014 at 2:57 PM Thanks, darling Nette!!! As for the avatar....took the pic on Friday...so very recent, Yes. Thanks for your kind words....

Jan Allison March 23, 2014 at 1:58 PM very clever write Eileen - love the acrostic bit at the end. good luck in the competition . Jan xxx Eileen Manassian March 23, 2014 at 2:58 PM Thanks, Jan....Glad you liked this write...Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2014 at 1:41 PM - THE BEST Mr. GREEN,'ve ever read about!!!!!! - Well done, imaginative - All the best to you in the contest Eileen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2014 at 1:44 PM No doubt!! :))))) Eileen Manassian March 23, 2014 at 1:42 PM You think, Mr Green would approve? HA HA! Thanks for the visit, Sunshine! When it comes to contests...I could do with some luck! ;) HUGS

Ken Carroll March 23, 2014 at 12:11 PM Extremely creative write Eileen..Thank you for your lovely visits to my page.. Eileen Manassian March 23, 2014 at 12:17 PM The pleasure was ALL mine, Ken. You are a favorite poet. I love your creative and romantic writes....Kisses like opium...quite a line...