Silly Lines For Mr Green In Helter Skelter Rhyme

GREEN eyes with flecks of honey
Bright smiles that make days sunny
Warm hugs from you, my bunny
Kisses that are so yummy!!!

Others are GREEN with envy
Cause you are oh, so trendy	
You drive me in your Bentley
Your touch brings me to frenzy

You are the best apple GREEN
One bite and I am a queen
Your love explodes on the scene
Oh, GREEN boy, where have you been?

G racious and gorgeous are you
R acy and rambunctious too
E dible down to the core
E xciting, you give me more
N aughty but nice, MR GREEN,
THE BEST GREEN, I've ever seen!!!!!!!!!!!!


March 23, 2014
PD's Contest
Anything GREEN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/9/2014 8:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Eileen. I am a bit late, but that is the way it goes when g.daughter is a priority. Smile.
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Date: 4/1/2014 5:44:00 PM
Nicely done. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/1/2014 2:23:00 AM
Hi clever and deserving of congratulations love xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2014 2:25:00 AM
Mandy!! Thanks for the visit and sweet words. hugs
Date: 4/1/2014 1:54:00 AM
Wonderful take on the green theme, congrats on the fine win, eileen
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2014 2:26:00 AM
Thank you, Dr Ram. I appreciate you visit.
Date: 3/31/2014 9:35:00 PM
HELLO FOREVER SWEET EILEEN, CONGRATULATIONS.....LINDA
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2014 2:48:00 AM
PD!!! Thank you, my dear. I always do well with you, and am forever grateful! Hugs
Date: 3/24/2014 9:16:00 AM
Ha ha, this is great, you filled the screen with green!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2014 2:49:00 AM
I did, didn't I? Thanks ever so much, Richard.
Date: 3/23/2014 10:55:00 PM
Ahhh...I liked it...made me smile..just before closing my eyes for sleep..night sweetie.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2014 2:49:00 AM
Thanks for visiting my silly green poem, MD. You are a dear!!! Hugs
Date: 3/23/2014 6:57:00 PM
I love what you did here Eileen. The green "Granny Smith" apple is my favorite....Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2014 2:51:00 AM
OH...yup. Granny Smith is yummy yummy! Thanks for the visit, Tim. Sorry I'm so late with my reply.
Date: 3/23/2014 6:56:00 PM
It may be silly but it's a really cute way to do the green contest. Just who IS this delectable Mr. Green? I remember a Mr. Green Jeans in Captain Kangeroo. That went off the air when I was just out of high school!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2014 2:53:00 AM
Oh Andrea....now you wouldn't want me to tell, would you? Where, then, is the mystery? Teasing you, sweetie...Hugs
Date: 3/23/2014 5:20:00 PM
Well done. I like the versatility in your lines -JT
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2014 2:54:00 AM
JT...heard your voice on Drake's show. Loved the way you read the poem, my dear. Beautiful. Thanks for visiting this silly poem of mine. Hugs
Date: 3/23/2014 3:40:00 PM
Hi Eileen! Another eye-catching avatar:) This witty poem shows a good sense of humour..another side to you. Simple, easy flowing, adequate rhyme...a mixture of 2 forms. I enjoyed it! bet it was fun to write :) // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/23/2014 3:45:00 PM
Thanks, Paul. ;-) Humour isn't my strong point, but now and again....I like to dabble in it. Glad you enjoyed this write. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 3/23/2014 2:51:00 PM
how creative of you to turn this page into the best of green, eileen... engaging!.. is that a new avatar?.. gorgeous!.. huggs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/23/2014 2:57:00 PM
Thanks, darling Nette!!! As for the avatar....took the pic on Friday...so very recent, Yes. Thanks for your kind words....
Date: 3/23/2014 1:58:00 PM
very clever write Eileen - love the acrostic bit at the end. good luck in the competition . Jan xxx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/23/2014 2:58:00 PM
Thanks, Jan....Glad you liked this write...Hugs
Date: 3/23/2014 1:41:00 PM
- THE BEST Mr. GREEN,'ve ever read about!!!!!! - Well done, imaginative - All the best to you in the contest Eileen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/23/2014 1:44:00 PM
No doubt!! :)))))
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/23/2014 1:42:00 PM
You think, Mr Green would approve? HA HA! Thanks for the visit, Sunshine! When it comes to contests...I could do with some luck! ;) HUGS
Date: 3/23/2014 12:11:00 PM
Extremely creative write Eileen..Thank you for your lovely visits to my page..
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/23/2014 12:17:00 PM
The pleasure was ALL mine, Ken. You are a favorite poet. I love your creative and romantic writes....Kisses like opium...quite a line...
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