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Silky White--Satin Smooth

A scent of Jergen's almond cream envelops me, remembering The essence of the lotion brings the heart a soothing memory She's in my dreams to ease the dawn White porcelain, her hands become the touch embracing time tonight I feel them pass across the light There is no blossoming of any tree No solace that can touch the quivering to match a keepsake memory that comes back for my company The hand that touched my face, with vows could soothe the shattered heart, and brow was white, and cool, was satin smooth and calmed the troubled seas,.... somehow
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/13/2015 8:02:00 PM
Congrats Carrie!
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Date: 8/13/2015 1:19:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your win. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 8/12/2015 11:26:00 PM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning poem Carrie!
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Date: 8/12/2015 5:18:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your "Any Poem #33" contest win. Thank you for the support. Stop by my latest blog. **A Good Read** if you'd like or have time... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/1/2014 7:15:00 PM
Very sweet, Carrie, I love the scent of Almond, didn't know Jergen's had one, lovely memory visuals though in this poem
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Date: 1/31/2014 4:33:00 PM
This reminds me so much of my grandmother !!! Her scent was always of Jergen's almond scent. Such an elegant woman with the creamiest white skin and gentle, oh so gentle her nature. Congratulations on your first place win in Francine's contest as well. A beautiful flowing poem... love it !!!
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Date: 1/31/2014 1:11:00 PM
Beautiful Carrie.....congratulations
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Date: 1/28/2014 9:18:00 AM
Congrats on your win! Blessings, Stacey
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Date: 1/27/2014 10:56:00 PM
My heartfelt congratulation on the win,Carrie
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Date: 1/27/2014 8:55:00 PM
hey she must have just judged this one. I barely got on it, but at least I got on!! Congrats to your. It was stupendous!!!
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Date: 1/27/2014 8:49:00 PM
congrats Carrie with another big win, wonderfully penned as usual
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Date: 1/8/2014 7:31:00 PM
You have made a beautiful nostalgic poem with this theme. Is it your mother, Carrie? That is who I am thinking.
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