John Trusty Poet Senryu

Silhouettes In Sunset of Life

To be young again.

                             Bit of a stretch, like my skin

                                                                          at sixty seven!




*For Sunset Silouettes contest

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Andrea Dietrich May 21, 2010 at 9:36 AM haha. I like how you thought of yourself in the scene. I hear you! Congrats on your win. LUv, Andrea

James Fraser May 18, 2010 at 1:31 PM Well done John on your placing in Carolyn's fine contest >> James

John Freeman May 17, 2010 at 6:44 PM This one is quite cool, young John boy.Smile! CONGRATULATIONS" on your success in Carolyn's contest. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 17, 2010 at 4:36 PM Congrats John on your winning poem in Carolyn's contest with these awesome words so honest and true... enjoy another wonderful win ...with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire May 17, 2010 at 3:30 PM John, congratulations on placing fifth in the contest with your witty poem! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta May 16, 2010 at 7:29 PM Wish you all the best in the contest.... nice images in second line