Silhouette of Regret

Inside my head bells of nostalgia incessantly do chime
Waking a mournful muse of longing and regret
I recognize her silhouette~ a wistful tall brunette
Forever chanting spells to turn back the hands of time

She waits till sunset to paint another cruel vignette
O to what heights I’d be eager to climb
To erase all traces of a lingering everhaunting crime
A much needed soul cleansing trek thru the mountains of Tibet



AP: 2nd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Romios Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 2:37 AM
Hats and horns and sparkling cider. Congrats.
Gauthier Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 7:38 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit, Panagiota.
Lindley Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 10:09 AM
My friend, congratulations on your win in this contest. The hopefulness and future dream of a successful new encounter hit me as almost a prayer! The deep lingering longing in this gem is immense. A fav-- a truly awesome piece..
Gauthier Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 9:24 PM
Thank you so much, Robert, for the lovely visit and compliment.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 3:20 AM
Wonderful win. Congrats and bless you, Gina
Gauthier Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 5:31 AM
Thanks, Gina. Much appreciated.
Mcguire Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 7:12 PM
Great Win!
Gauthier Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 5:32 AM
Thanks, Timothy, much appreciated.
One Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 12:42 PM
some nice lines here... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Gauthier Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 1:31 PM
Thank you so much, SO. Most appreciated. Thanks for the inspirational nudge.
Kulkarni Avatar
October 12, 2019 at 2:16 PM
Great expressions through your words!!
Gauthier Avatar
October 12, 2019 at 6:48 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Smita.
Romios Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 6:09 PM
Best wishes.. Just a superb write, my friend Panagiota Best to you
Gauthier Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 7:02 PM
Thank you, Panagiota. Most appreciated.
Mcguire Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 11:47 PM
FAB! LOVE IT!
Gauthier Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 12:24 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Timothy.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 10:48 AM
"soul cleansing through the mountain of Tibet"- the perfect touch to such a gorgeous write. Good luck in the contest Line. A winner!
Gauthier Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 12:04 PM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 9:33 AM
Great one Line. ! :)
Gauthier Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 12:05 PM
Thanks, Heidi. Much appreciated.
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