Chris Green Poet Free verse

Silently - We - Discover - Love

Silently ~ we ~ discover ~ love    

Silently

floating on a lily pad
softly atop twilight waters,
drifting a wind swept current
meandering between
pine needle shores

we

gather moon beams,
wishfully gazing upon
reflections of stardust tapestries
saturating cosmic dreams,
as the two of us

discover

whispering ripples flowing, 
formed of heartbeat echoes,
tranquil rhythms weaving through  
the serenity of the night
in quiet persuasions of

love

Good Night Soupers

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Darren White January 5, 2017 at 8:12 AM If I had been awake, I'd silently have wished you Good Night Chris Green January 5, 2017 at 10:03 AM Thanks so much Darren, what a nice thing to say.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2017 at 3:51 AM - A beautiful poem that brings delight, Chris - A stylish and clean layout - I say good morning :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Chris Green January 5, 2017 at 10:02 AM Ho there Anne-Lise. Thanks so much my friend.

Charmaine Chircop January 5, 2017 at 3:07 AM Whispering ripples flowing-I can hear them..to gather moonbeams...I can see that...In silence discovering love...That's a beautiful feeling..Silence indeed reveals so much of what once feel...Awesome ..Beautiful..Goodnight. Chris Green January 5, 2017 at 10:02 AM I am happy you could feel this one Charmaine. Thank you once again for the smile I am wearing.

John Lawless January 4, 2017 at 9:14 PM WOW...What a great slow ya down and put ya to bed beauty of a night time story. Chris Green January 5, 2017 at 10:01 AM Thanks John, happy to help your day end slow and easy. :)

White Wolf January 4, 2017 at 9:00 PM I love how you have done the format in this poem. Quite special indeed! Love it, Chris Chris Green January 5, 2017 at 10:00 AM Thanks Rick, I am thrilled you liked this one.

Matthew Anish January 4, 2017 at 8:32 PM What a cosmic work! Good job! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish Chris Green January 5, 2017 at 10:00 AM Thanks for reading and commenting Matthew

Claudia Polydoro January 4, 2017 at 6:47 PM This is so beautiful, Chris! Even the reading asked for reverence... loved it. A great night to you... Chris Green January 5, 2017 at 10:00 AM Thank you so very much Claudia.