Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Silently

Silently it travels,
along this tree lined way
Shouldered by the softest green,
nature on display

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Carved of destinations,
inviting is the scene
Heading off to nowhere fast,
lost inside a dream

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Evergreen endeavors,
now heed the nightly call
Whispering on fragrant winds,
lingering this fall

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You and I together,
love becomes the view
For nature is so beautiful,
when it’s shared with you

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Elaine Perrin October 10, 2019 at 6:15 AM Such a beautiful picture you have painted :-) x Chris Green October 10, 2019 at 10:03 AM Thank you again Elaine. Your kindness always brings a smile to me.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2019 at 1:18 PM - It's wonderful to go out in nature and enjoy it ... ... feel the air on your face :) - Know that you are alive and that you are part of the whole ecosystem - I am so lucky to live in an area of amazing nature :) - A beautiful poem, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Chris Green October 9, 2019 at 1:57 PM Thank you so much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

Winged Warrior October 9, 2019 at 5:19 AM Lovely wording my friend...you bring us pleasurable poetry...a talented pen you have...^WW^ :o) Chris Green October 9, 2019 at 8:49 AM Thanks so very much my friend.

Kim Rodrigues October 8, 2019 at 5:09 PM Lovely! And it looks like you planted a tree on your post. Chris Green October 9, 2019 at 8:48 AM Thanks so much Kim. I am happy you enjoyed this. I hope it doesn't lose all of its leaves. :)

Paula Goldsmith October 8, 2019 at 3:07 PM What a pretty picture you painted with your words............ Chris Green October 9, 2019 at 8:47 AM Thank you so much Paula

Gershon Wolf October 8, 2019 at 10:29 AM This so beautifully conceived, and the phrasing is 'vintage Chris Green.' … I was especially intrigued by the line, 'Shouldered by the softest green.' Lit aficionados might dig deep for the significance of your name appearing in the poem. Bravo! Warmest wishes, Gershon Chris Green October 9, 2019 at 8:47 AM Thanks so very much my friend. A little green is always a good thing I thing. : )

Heidi Sands October 7, 2019 at 8:09 PM Unbelievable someone has to come in here with a comment to disrupt beautiful poetry. Rude and disrespectful! Just stop. Chris Green October 9, 2019 at 8:46 AM Some people are just like that. Thank you so much Heidi.

Arthur Vaso October 5, 2019 at 2:18 AM Children in concentration camps, as Wagner composed, and you wonder why? Gershon Wolf October 8, 2019 at 10:26 AM Arthur: What does your comment have to do with the poem Chris wrote?! That's a rhetorical question, of course... because your comment has nothing to do with Chris' poem, does it?! ~ Gershon

Hello There October 4, 2019 at 10:40 PM This poem is evergreen as are many of your written works ~ beautiful :) Chris Green October 9, 2019 at 8:45 AM Thank you so very much my friend.

Regina Mcintosh October 4, 2019 at 9:52 PM Beautiful as a dream. Love it... Bless you always, Gina Chris Green October 9, 2019 at 8:44 AM Thanks so very much Gina.

Sandra Adams October 4, 2019 at 9:34 PM Or nature is more beautiful when penned through your words .... gorgeous write Chris :) hugs Chris Green October 9, 2019 at 8:44 AM What a nice thing to say. Thank you so much Sandy.

John Hamilton October 4, 2019 at 9:18 PM Well done...goodnight sleep tight! Chris Green October 9, 2019 at 8:44 AM Thanks so much my friend.

Michelle Faulkner October 4, 2019 at 8:30 PM You have such an evocative pen, Chris, I can see the beauty of fall through your words! Chris Green October 9, 2019 at 8:43 AM Thank you so much Michelle. I am happy you liked it.

Heidi Sands October 4, 2019 at 5:33 PM Another special poem to end the day perfectly. Thanks for sharing this FAV Chris :) Chris Green October 9, 2019 at 8:43 AM Thank you so very much Heidi for always being so nice to me

Edward Ibeh October 4, 2019 at 5:24 PM Excellent poem, Chris!:-) Chris Green October 9, 2019 at 8:43 AM Thanks so much Edward