Silently

Silently it travels, along this tree lined way Shouldered by the softest green, nature on display ~ Carved of destinations, inviting is the scene Heading off to nowhere fast, lost inside a dream ~ Evergreen endeavors, now heed the nightly call Whispering on fragrant winds, lingering this fall ~ You and I together, love becomes the view For nature is so beautiful, when it’s shared with you ~

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Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/10/2019 6:15:00 AM

Such a beautiful picture you have painted :-) x

Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2019 10:03:00 AM

Thank you again Elaine. Your kindness always brings a smile to me.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/9/2019 1:18:00 PM

- It's wonderful to go out in nature and enjoy it ... ... feel the air on your face :) - Know that you are alive and that you are part of the whole ecosystem - I am so lucky to live in an area of amazing nature :) - A beautiful poem, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/9/2019 1:57:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/9/2019 5:19:00 AM

Lovely wording my friend...you bring us pleasurable poetry...a talented pen you have...^WW^ :o)

Chris Green
Date: 10/9/2019 8:49:00 AM

Thanks so very much my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/8/2019 5:09:00 PM

Lovely! And it looks like you planted a tree on your post.

Chris Green
Date: 10/9/2019 8:48:00 AM

Thanks so much Kim. I am happy you enjoyed this. I hope it doesn't lose all of its leaves. :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/8/2019 3:07:00 PM

What a pretty picture you painted with your words............

Chris Green
Date: 10/9/2019 8:47:00 AM

Thank you so much Paula

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/8/2019 10:29:00 AM

This so beautifully conceived, and the phrasing is 'vintage Chris Green.' … I was especially intrigued by the line, 'Shouldered by the softest green.' Lit aficionados might dig deep for the significance of your name appearing in the poem. Bravo! Warmest wishes, Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 10/9/2019 8:47:00 AM

Thanks so very much my friend. A little green is always a good thing I thing. : )

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/7/2019 8:09:00 PM

Unbelievable someone has to come in here with a comment to disrupt beautiful poetry. Rude and disrespectful! Just stop.

Chris Green
Date: 10/9/2019 8:46:00 AM

Some people are just like that. Thank you so much Heidi.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/5/2019 2:18:00 AM

Children in concentration camps, as Wagner composed, and you wonder why?

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/8/2019 10:26:00 AM

Arthur: What does your comment have to do with the poem Chris wrote?! That's a rhetorical question, of course... because your comment has nothing to do with Chris' poem, does it?! ~ Gershon