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Silent, the Castle Doors

******************************************************************************** Stillness held the flower, in distant gazes spilling from their palms... A cats meow, resounding atop timeless rafters; peering at the stage About a sixteenth century romance; dramatica, close the castle door Hush the crowd betwixt breath they keep; frozen in this their heart As Juliet lifts her tearful blade and Romeo's love, now fast asleep; dreams Not weep as time does part to gather once more; aneath these stars... ******************************************************************************** ...“Silent, the Castle Doors” *

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/29/2012 3:43:00 PM
nice,,,,,, very nice sarah ;}
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Date: 11/17/2011 1:59:00 PM
Absolutly beautiful.
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Date: 11/12/2011 3:43:00 AM
this is beautiful, Sarah.. Thanx for stopping by :)
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Date: 11/10/2011 3:20:00 PM
Yes, some emotions are timeless and shared. Love, daver
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Date: 11/9/2011 8:21:00 PM
sara, was just away for a day and here i am, bewilered by the refrains of your wafting lyrics... sweetly indescribable!..:) huggs and miss ya!
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Date: 11/9/2011 7:51:00 PM
Perhaps they are still together dear Sarah. So romantic and I love how you weave their romance into your sweet verse. Luv, Elizabeth
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Date: 11/9/2011 2:09:00 PM
Great work..Enjoyed the passionate write..So passionate was the love that Romeo and Juliet shared..Thanks for the kind review of my work..It was uplifting to have you stop by..Sara
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Date: 11/9/2011 7:24:00 AM
true love is such a heartache. lovely pen yet again.
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Date: 11/9/2011 5:09:00 AM
Beautifully penned my dear Sarah, luv shannon
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Date: 11/8/2011 11:55:00 PM
Interesting lines. Going adrift though may not be so sweet for the sea can get quite rough and swallow you. Thank you for your comments on my poem. Caroline.
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