Sarah Seraphin Poet Free verse

Silent, the Castle Doors

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Stillness held the flower, in distant gazes spilling from their palms...

A cats meow, resounding atop timeless rafters; peering at the stage

About a sixteenth century romance; dramatica, close the castle door

Hush the crowd betwixt breath they keep; frozen in this their heart

As Juliet lifts her tearful blade and Romeo's love, now fast asleep; dreams

Not weep as time does part to gather once more; aneath these stars...

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...“Silent, the Castle Doors” *

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Debbie Duncan August 29, 2012 at 3:43 PM nice,,,,,, very nice sarah ;}

Micaiah Price November 17, 2011 at 1:59 PM Absolutly beautiful.

Dinda Minardi November 12, 2011 at 3:43 AM this is beautiful, Sarah.. Thanx for stopping by :)

Daver Austin November 10, 2011 at 3:20 PM Yes, some emotions are timeless and shared. Love, daver

Nette Onclaud November 9, 2011 at 8:21 PM sara, was just away for a day and here i am, bewilered by the refrains of your wafting lyrics... sweetly indescribable!..:) huggs and miss ya!

Elizabeth Wesley November 9, 2011 at 7:51 PM Perhaps they are still together dear Sarah. So romantic and I love how you weave their romance into your sweet verse. Luv, Elizabeth

Sara Kendrick November 9, 2011 at 2:09 PM Great work..Enjoyed the passionate write..So passionate was the love that Romeo and Juliet shared..Thanks for the kind review of my work..It was uplifting to have you stop by..Sara

Lisa Cooper November 9, 2011 at 7:24 AM true love is such a heartache. lovely pen yet again.

Shannon Deane November 9, 2011 at 5:09 AM Beautifully penned my dear Sarah, luv shannon

Caroline Cécile Delacroix November 8, 2011 at 11:55 PM Interesting lines. Going adrift though may not be so sweet for the sea can get quite rough and swallow you. Thank you for your comments on my poem. Caroline.