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Crinkles around eyes and smile on my face, attempting to hide the scars of my soul, look toward the skies, praying for God’s grace. Of wabi-sabi stains, remains no trace, as friends and foes, my countenance extol; crinkles around eyes and smile on my face. Wounded and weary, I slow down my pace, whilst though yet still playing out my life role, look toward the skies, praying for God’s grace. For both pain and pleasure, as I do brace, my hypocritical heart scores a goal ~ crinkles around eyes and smile on my face. Futile is seeking, of objects I chase and yet as I do veer out of control, look toward the skies, praying for God’s grace. Seeing that life is no puzzle to lace, my heart’s engulfed by bliss, that makes soul whole. Crinkles around eyes and smile on my face, look toward the skies, praying for God’s grace. 04-August-2022 FIRST PERSON VILLANELLE Poetry Contest Sponsor: L Milton Hankins

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Date: 9/4/2022 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Beautiful! :)Paulette
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Date: 9/3/2022 1:49:00 AM
Great symbolization. Great writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/3/2022 7:36:00 AM
Thank you, Chris :)
Date: 9/2/2022 7:58:00 AM
Congratulations, Unseeking Seeker, on your winning spot in my Villanelle contest. I found your poem very moving, and I particularly enjoyed your phrasing and rhyme.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/2/2022 9:12:00 AM
Very deserving, my friend.
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Date: 9/2/2022 8:33:00 AM
Wow! I made it! Thanks for the appreciation and recognition, Milt! :)
Date: 9/2/2022 7:52:00 AM
Well, Milt chose wisely :) Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/2/2022 8:33:00 AM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 8/4/2022 1:26:00 AM
well written personal poem. Best for a win.
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/4/2022 2:02:00 AM
Nah ~ Milt is a perfectionist and I don’t use this form much. Writing in first person is a strain too, for me. I prefer the words ‘we’, ‘us’, ‘our’ signalling underlying oneness of humanity.

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