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Silent Song

In the early morning hour Cannot get me off the bed I must go and take a shower Still I’m lying here instead Crows are croaking, bells are ringing News keep waiting for my eyes Where are you, and your sweet singing, What is left to idealize? Not a sign of you this morning In the room and in the hall You should know that I’m yearning Where are you, I call and call With each minute I sense clearer That I wait a bit too long Out you are, although still near With your silent morning song..

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Date: 7/28/2024 8:52:00 PM
A quiet person can make a person feel alone. But which is preferred? I enjoy this poem.
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Gregory Colodub
Date: 7/28/2024 11:39:00 PM
Thank you, Hilda! The absence is always mutual, so it makes a dissonance that is hard to formulate, but from that dissonace one hears a hum of a familiar melody, though the person who sings is unseen.
Date: 7/28/2024 4:54:00 PM
This is filled with melodic romantic longing. Very sweet! Enjoyed reading.
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Gregory Colodub
Date: 7/28/2024 11:35:00 PM
Thank you very much for enjoying the poem, dear Karen!
Date: 7/28/2024 2:15:00 PM
Love the Title, love the poem Gregory!! Debx
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Gregory Colodub
Date: 7/28/2024 2:30:00 PM
Oh thank you, dear Deb! Your support means a lot to me x

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