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Sometimes.. Life can be a silent serenade, a sequence of sentimental eyes and deep sighs.. Contemplating… Why? I guess.. It is just another sad poem, but with a different pen - bleeding sorrow, afraid of tomorrow. The atmosphere is a contrast, between black and blues. Trying to let go of reminiscent hues, an artificial smile, hiding a regretful persona. In solitude when you sit and listen, you can hear - a crumbling heart, and uncontrollable tears. Lost in depths of despair, surrounded by the smell of bitter fears and I don’t care, about the songs mad birds sing only my silent serenade.

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Ink Empress

Date: 1/12/2024 5:54:00 AM

Wow this is brilliant and i think i started using “ silent serenade” too inspired by you. And now i read this and just think how deep and meaningful it is. And the arrangement enhances it more. I love this poem. And its a fave for me! Congratulations on your well deserved win.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/12/2024 3:24:00 AM

Dear SO, Congrats on your win. Your poem is a journey through the nuances of life's silent serenade. The sequence of sentimental eyes and deep sighs beautifully captures the contemplation of why life unfolds in such ways. The contrast between black and blues, the struggle to let go of reminiscent shades, and the portrayal of an artificial smile hiding a regretful persona add depth to your words. In solitude, the echoes of a crumbling heart are profound. Beautifully Penned! Blessings Daniel

R. B. Cawis

Date: 1/12/2024 2:31:00 AM

More words could be said in silence... Congratulations...

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/9/2019 12:39:00 AM

A very sad, powerful and brilliant poem. Your sadness permeates through many of your poems SO - my heart feels for you! Your amazing and delightful poems soar my friend. Poetry hugs, Jennifer

Don Pettinelli

Date: 2/19/2019 2:21:00 PM

I loved it! I have never read any of your poems that I didn't like. You are gifted by God.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/15/2019 2:02:00 PM

Hello Silent One,silents is golden. Is what the song says. My fav song, This poem is my fav. Have a nice day my friend.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/14/2019 10:28:00 AM

Sometimes word are not needed and we need the sound of silence. Well said. love phyl

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/13/2019 2:39:00 PM

Another very sad and painful poem that pulls emotion out of the reader. I love the song; you've done it justice with this poem.

Constance La France

Date: 1/13/2019 1:35:00 PM

Silent, a crumbling heart, a different pen, well, this is just beautifully written, the underlining sadness seeps into the readers mind and touches the heart, I love every word penned, well done ~

Silent One
Date: 1/13/2019 2:04:00 PM

Thank you for your feedback.. Appreciated..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/13/2019 1:34:00 PM

- I guess .. it is just another ... excellent poem, S.O. ... and I really care, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One
Date: 1/13/2019 2:04:00 PM

Thank you..

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 1/13/2019 1:21:00 AM

'I don't care about the songs mad birds sing'... great line. Very good write.

Silent One
Date: 1/13/2019 10:31:00 AM

Thanks...Have to be careful of the mad birds..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2019 8:26:00 PM

beautiful imagery , Silent One. the songs mad birds sing. Love that line!

Silent One
Date: 1/13/2019 10:37:00 AM

Thank you Andrea..

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/12/2019 8:24:00 PM

I'm fascinated with the formatting; it added something in the poems favor, blended with the unique delivery of word streams. This has so many elements cloaking it in originality and fascinating me on many levels. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Silent One
Date: 1/13/2019 10:37:00 AM

I agree with the formatting comment..It helps to give more feeling to a poem..Thanks CayCay..

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/12/2019 7:22:00 PM

This holds so many emotions. A heart finds peace within, in- the silence. Sometimes. Even so, it isn't always easy to get through such moments. ~ Brandy

Silent One
Date: 1/13/2019 10:38:00 AM

Indeed it does.. Thank you Brandy..

Judge Santiago Burdon

Date: 1/12/2019 3:59:00 PM

Can you hear my silent response?

Silent One
Date: 1/13/2019 10:40:00 AM

Thanks.. yes loud and clear..

Joseph May

Date: 1/12/2019 2:56:00 PM

No words needed, just the sound of silence...Well penned SO

Silent One
Date: 1/13/2019 10:43:00 AM

Thanks..

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/12/2019 2:44:00 PM

wow, this shook my heart Silent One.

Silent One
Date: 1/13/2019 10:43:00 AM

Glad you liked it..

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/12/2019 1:31:00 PM

Hi Silent, your silent serenade does sing loudly in poetic grace. You are able to use the free verse form with such skill and creativity. I swim through the sadness, each wonderful line does touch the heart my friend. I think I am having another soppy day. Yes. Tears at the end. IO= Love the content. Your poetic grace always shines. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.

Silent One
Date: 1/13/2019 10:44:00 AM

Thank you Mike..

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/12/2019 1:13:00 PM

In the silence you can feel dispair but it can also bring you a certain peace within. So well written S.O. Tom

Silent One
Date: 1/13/2019 1:12:00 PM

Indeed.. Thank you Tom.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/12/2019 12:01:00 PM

oh, so very sad... another very good verse... Hugs Eve

Silent One
Date: 1/13/2019 1:20:00 PM

Thank you Eve..

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/12/2019 12:00:00 PM

WoW! Silent, The song you selected gave more depth to an aleady deep write. I found it to be sad and melancholy. The words you chose set the mood and tone for a well written write. The last stanzas" and.... I don’t care,........about the songs mad birds sing......only my silent serenade". Was a good ending to your "silent serenade". As always Excellent job- Alexis

Silent One
Date: 1/13/2019 1:21:00 PM

Thank You Alexis... Im an expert in silent serenades..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/12/2019 11:35:00 AM

The thought of the "sound" of a crumbling heart and falling tears evokes such deep sadness, Silent One. Holding my father's hand as he lay dying, the tears that puddled beneath me seemed to explode like grenades on the floor. Can relate to the sadness you convey so well, my friend. Just hope you are not experiencing such trauma at this time. A heartfelt and captivating poem. Best wishes, Carolyn

Silent One
Date: 1/12/2019 11:36:00 AM

Images of you holding your father's hand, fill me with sadness, as I have also been there... I am find Carolyn, this is an old poem, I stumbled upon.. Thank you so much for your kind words and well wishes..

Robert Lindley

Date: 1/12/2019 11:32:00 AM

Everything, and I mean everything about this jewel shouts true and classic poetry to me. And with a perfect ending too.. A fav, another gleaming gem..

Silent One
Date: 1/12/2019 11:37:00 AM

Thank you Robert, as you have shown me, some older poems are always worth posting..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/12/2019 11:13:00 AM

Melancholy tone in your words SO..seeking answers from crumbling heart, uncontrollable tears..all speaking so loudly..in silence! Sometimes, one feels the way you describe..especially in the ending lines.

Silent One
Date: 1/12/2019 11:54:00 AM

Thank you Vijay..

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/12/2019 10:44:00 AM

Sadly wonderful Silent One, I hope I didn't miss a stanza...

Silent One
Date: 1/12/2019 10:46:00 AM

Thanks Charlie, I don't think you did..