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Silent Pain Screaming

How can I fetch what's inside me? It's a mental scream I can see, They had poured fear through my mind's crease, Tears swell deep ache, I grieve in peace. There has been a real stage play, Rumbling in the chasm and airway,  This caused the effect of the cease, Tears swell deep ache, I grieve in peace. Screaming voices drove me insane, Shooters, killers, and guns again, Frail life blights me on endless lease, Tears swell deep ache, I grieve in peace.   We yield what we hear, but we hear, In our blood, others' scars are clear, We wipe tears but also decrease, Tears swell deep ache, I grieve in peace.    My wounds are still bright in my mind, Anguish since the long-term rewind, Out of sight, cracked into pieces, Tears swell deep ache, I grieve in peace.    We're together despite the waves, Thrilled as tides rush us to the caves, Earth seems to cast us a release, Tears swell deep ache, I grieve in peace.  We plant hope as a human seed, Love grows in the other being's deed,  These keen emotions can't surcease,   Tears swell deep ache, I grieve in peace.  What if rain wipes tears of sadness? We'll free ourselves from the brashness, Teases to shed tears of caprice? Tears swell deep ache, I grieve in peace. Whether you cry from pain or bliss, It's not rain that makes that abyss, Crying is nature, human peeps, Tears swell deep ache, I grieve in peace.  My sorrow is couched in downpour, Sobbing has not yet come down more, I chafe drenched while I wait for cease, Tears swell deep ache, I grieve in peace. Behind my face, that beams a smile, Long, twisty, and pitch-black road style, Secret cries have been rife with geese, Tears swell deep ache, I grieve in peace.
Checked by HMS.COM/ 8 syllables.com  1St place contest winner Written: November 14, 2022 Pick-A-Title, Vol 33 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
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Peck Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 9:02 AM
Wow, Lasaad--this is achingly beautiful. Indeed a masterpiece. Congratulations on trophy win!
Pandit Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 11:30 AM
Back with BIG congrats on your TOP win, Lasaad.
Alex Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 8:09 PM
The entire poem is very beautifully written, very specially the last stanza. Congratulations!
George Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 8:10 AM
Congratulations dear Lasaad on your well deserved first place win !
Ibeh Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 6:17 AM
Wow, Lasaad, this poem is a masterpiece! An instant fave for me. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
Poet Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 5:24 AM
Dear Edward, thank you so much for your honesty and kindness. Appreciate that you read placed and commented on my poem, and your favorite.
Baker Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 4:49 PM
Our soul cries out from within. The pain of not knowing or not understanding is often felt as impossible to overcome. Life is a struggle when we do not know as much as we want to know, other find bliss in not striving for understanding or finding the answer to our whys. Poem written to fix the contest well. Good luck my friend. Bill
George Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 7:33 PM
Sticking to the syllable count and telling what you have to say expressing the acute torment of pain screaming inside, is not an easy task. But in your expert hands, nothing is difficult and everything- facile ! Excellent poetry ! All the best dear friend !
Pandit Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 4:39 AM
Your poetic prowess shines with every write my friend. Not easy to write a long Kyrielle-- as you have done fabulously. A TOP winner I predict.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 3:00 AM
Your poetry is always fine. Well done.
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