Silent Night

The night seems so still and revered by many,
   Tranquil shadows of the half moon above,
        Heavenly halo's of peace and plenty,
             Full of joy and the release of turtledoves.

We all gather while holding hands,
    All strangers from my neighborhood,
        And as our circle of trust quietly expands,
            The reason for this day is instantly understood.

For the birth of our Savior Jesus Christ,
    Has brought a bright star in the sky,
       All shall follow it until He arrives,
          While the shepherds wait and angels cry.

"Alleluia" has been sung and heard,
    The Virgin Mother has brought us a child,
        Oh, how our prayers have been answered,
           A gift so big for the world, yet so mild.

The night seems so still and revered by many,
    Calming sensation throughout the universe,
        Seems like a dream or formal imagery,
            I am so humbly immersed and undeserved.

Holy and sacred, consecrated yet small,
   Our dear Savior has come to save us,
      As we all sing “Peace and joy to us all",
          Watching the sun settle falling into dusk.



Based upon the Christmas Carol "Silent Night"
12 December 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Cronin Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 3:45 PM
So lovely Laura, congrats on your placement in the contest!
Sage Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 6:01 PM
congratulations dear
Cwiak Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 4:42 PM
Beautifully expressed here, Laura. What a wonderful way to start the New Year by reading this winner. Congrats to you!
A  Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Laura, congrats on your Christmas Carol. SKAT :)
Haight Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 6:36 PM
Such a lovely poem that presents the awe and wonder of that night in Bethlehem and our special "Silent Night" hymn. Congratulations on your nice win, Laura. Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 6:17 PM
You truly captured the essence, Laura! BIG congrats on a marvelous win.
Ebbs Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 4:17 PM
Enjoyed this Laura, congrats on your win!
Godwin Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 4:01 PM
So very lovely - a joy to read. Congratulations on your win, Laura ... CayCay
Allison Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 3:51 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Luloo:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 3:19 PM
Laura,I really enjoyed your wonderful poem : ) beautifully written! Congratulations on your win!
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January 3, 2016 at 1:40 PM
Yours is truly a lovely Christmas Carol, Laura! I have missed many inspired poems lately....glad this one is on the winners' list for I might have missed it completely! Congratulations!! ~ All the best ~*~ paul
Scars Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 1:42 PM
Thank you Paul :):) You are always so kind to me, it is very much appreciated *smiles* -luloo
Deschler Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 1:30 PM
A beautiful interpretation of the song, Silent Night... Very well written with a smooth flow and rhyme and nice imagery. Congrats on a win, Laura!
Scars Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 1:32 PM
Many thanks Kelly, I am honored. I really enjoyed your contest! Thank you :)-luloo Be blessed!
Y. Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 8:09 PM
Laura, your amazing write complimented the song really well. You painted a beautiful scene with words and it was such a lovely sight. Great job! Good luck in the contest:-) Alexis 7
Scars Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 8:27 PM
Thank you Alexis :)-lu *smiles*
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November 29, 2015 at 8:22 PM
Hi Laura, I miss reading your poems. A beautiful and wonderful feeling. the imagery is one of the best I've read today on my return. Love LINDA
Scars Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 8:32 PM
Thank you Linda, I hope you are all well? Nice to hear from you today! :)-lu *SMILES*
Allison Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 5:06 PM
a lovely quatrain Laura good luck in the carol contest:-) hugs jan xx
Scars Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 5:15 PM
Thank you Jan :) *smiles*
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