Lucilla Carrillo Poet Free verse

Silent Night

 Silent Night

There in the silent night, I want to be with you.
There in The silent night - I want you to love me 
like you never did before.

There in the silent night - I want to built my love
nest with you. There in the silent night, so I can
hear better the true words of your love.

There in the silent night - I want you to love me
as much as I love you. There in the still of the 
night - I want you to love me until daylight... 

01/11/2014
Written by Lucilla M.Carrillo

Note... I hope you like this. I don't write too 
many love poems.

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Danielle Satterfield June 21, 2014 at 2:25 PM This poem is sweet . I enjoy reading it. Lucilla Carrillo June 21, 2014 at 4:09 PM Danielle; Thanks for reading my poem. I will visit you later. I just got out of the hospital.

Richard D Seal February 25, 2014 at 6:00 PM Hiya Lucy, Ive been in and out of soup lately, busy time, now trying to catch up. Your love poem here is just beautiful. Take care, Richard Lucilla Carrillo March 3, 2014 at 6:00 PM Thanks You Richard. I will be going back to the hospital next month. About my hair cut - It is growing. Richard D Seal February 25, 2014 at 6:01 PM PS, Great haircut you have there

Phyllis Babcock January 19, 2014 at 2:11 PM A nice wishful night wanting life to be filled with passion. Yes we would all like that kind of night filled with only love. Love your poem. love phyl

Bl Devnath January 16, 2014 at 12:10 PM Nice hope with nice expectation. A beautiful poem filled up with only love. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl

Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2014 at 11:55 AM This is a sure honest to goodness love poem, sweetie. Very nice.

Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2014 at 11:55 AM what day of March are you? My mom is Aries, but she was born in late March. Somehow you feel like a Pisces to me?

Eileen Manassian January 12, 2014 at 1:49 AM Very passionate and sweet!!!! Hope you are feeling better, my dear.....It's good to have you back!!!

John Loving Iii January 11, 2014 at 10:02 PM All love poetry offers us something.

Russell Sivey January 11, 2014 at 9:16 PM This is a sweet write here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this blessed poem this evening! What a lovely piece, such a grandiose poem, Great Work!!

Robert Pettit January 11, 2014 at 5:34 PM This is good to read even on a noisy night.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 11, 2014 at 5:08 PM - A beautiful love poem my dear friend Lucilla! - Build your love nest and live in joy! - Have a great weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick January 11, 2014 at 5:02 PM Very passionate work..I enjoyed reading your love thoughts this eve..Thanks for the visit to my page..I am glad that you liked the work..Your comments are always upliftiing..Sara