Silent Kingdom

A fallen kingdom of gloom
The murky lands glisten with doom
A lonely road, deserted by time
So perfect now, this kingdom is mine

I paint the moon from memory’s will
The swirling fog keeps my heart still
I’d count on truth, but all light is gone
The only fact is that I breathe on

I wake again, somewhere inside
This kingdom speaks the darkest desires
A grave recalls nursing my pain
The tombs beneath all know my name

A thousand years, decaying in sin
Another hour is a hundred within
A mirror breaks every time I recall
I used to smile; I had life before

I wake again, what was it I found?
The scent of pain, and once more I’m bound
This kingdom knows too much to talk
Now I sleep in graves, as silence befalls

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/11/2010 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Ian. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2010 2:53:00 PM
Wow, stunning ! Congratulations being featured this week ! much love, james
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Date: 11/8/2010 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Ian. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/25/2009 4:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:57:00 PM
Congrats on being featured...great poem-Rhonda hero
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Date: 9/24/2009 2:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Ian. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:54:00 PM
Ian, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 9/24/2009 8:26:00 AM
Dear Ian, Congratulations on your well deserved feature of the week. Love and Light, Lainie.
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Date: 9/24/2009 4:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Ian. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/26/2009 8:53:00 PM
Ian, this is wonderfully written. Such depth and vivid imagery. Very well done.
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