Silent Heart

Take your hat off and you shut the door
Place your lunch can on the kitchen floor
There are no messages on the telephone
Another evening to be all alone
Wishing that you had more time to spend
Never thought that it would ever end
Life they say has its ups and downs
Stories written by circus clowns
Love was ours until death do part
Still feel the beating of a silent heart
Empty arms outstretched in the rain
untouched lips that cry out in pain
Lie alone upon your double bed
Touch the pillow where she laid her head
In the darkness you seem to be so weak
Feel the teardrop running down your cheek
 Alarm goes off and you begin your day
Wishing the pain would somehow go away
Same routine each day an endless storm
Only memories left to keep you warm
Loneliness refuses to depart
But you find comfort in a silent heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/24/2012 1:06:00 PM
Another beautiful piece of writing! Very moving, wonderful presentation of story. I also enjoyed your Unity poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 9/25/2011 11:54:00 PM
This is a beautiful write Vince...a very touching piece...smiles...chiquita
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Date: 7/5/2011 6:35:00 PM
Wow, very touching and true.made me cry...Thanks for all the comments..
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Date: 5/30/2011 1:36:00 PM
An enchanting love poem that touches the heart. Your remarks on my poem Obstinate Heart is so true. -Mohammad
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Date: 4/17/2011 11:51:00 PM
rated now
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Date: 4/17/2011 11:49:00 PM
This poem broke My heart...Sad and beautiful... we all fear the loneliness after...just beautifully expressed, my friend!!! Love, Iolanda Thank you for your nice comment several days ago...
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Date: 4/17/2011 2:05:00 PM
Sorry to say I'm right here in the lonely room with you! Great write Vince, it's REAL a good one for my contest [but I so sorry you feel like this!] Light & Love
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Date: 4/14/2011 9:37:00 AM
Magnificent write but so very sad Vince. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/14/2011 7:42:00 AM
Heart-wrenching, Vince. I wrote a sonnet, 'The Rose and the Thorn', much along the same line. I know these feeling all-to-wll. Hugs, Lainie
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Date: 4/13/2011 7:17:00 PM
oh my stars, vince... how you could merge logic with emotions stuns me... i melt in the bittersweet sentiments of this towering piece... best of winning wishes to you... a fav of mine for the contest! :) huggs, nette
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