Silent Dawn, Streets of Calm

Her morning silence brings me peace & soothes me as I breathe, 
To embrace her beauty, drops me to my knees.
It's the calm I feel, the appreciation that's instilled.
This is why in my city, I believe...

To walk her as I do, be able to see her each new moon
gives me pleasure & keeps me in tune.
Feeling the brisk coolness on your face as it's coming in from the ocean breeze.
To see the beach at dawn & the sun as it sets in to the sea, 
This is what makes me, me.
The 4 corner stone walled, mountain tops & millions of looking glass eyes which, cover all four sides go scaling up into Heaven, way up into the sky.

To view Los Angeles from a far, sit looking up at stars, watching as they come falling from the skies.
It's some what sad to see & just as hard to watch as this city comes to life. 
Never the less, it's in her nature & can't be changed, to go from darkness into daylight.
If all I'll ever know is the concrete that holds her all together & the asphalt streets I've, walked forever. 
Then I'm  glad to say, I was born here in beautiful East L.A...
 I could walk these streets, feel her breeze, she's all I'll 
ever need.
The City of Angels is where I live, I couldn't leave her ever!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 9/9/2008 5:30:00 AM
David, congratulations on your First Place win in Rhea's contest! Absolutely awesome write and so well deserved! Sorry I ever missed it! Love, Shar
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