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Silent Cacophony

To finish her work and to honour my love who now dwells forever in heaven above It’s something that I am committed to do to bring her invention to each one of you She worked for a doctorate and a degree to be the inventor she so longed to be To bring forth the tiniest sounds to our ears the sounds of near silence that nobody hears Convinced that we’ve all missed the utter delight of whispers and murmurs so soft in the night She set out to amplify sounds that slip by like lenses that show infra-red to the eye She’d found ways to listen to daffodils humming ironic that she never heard the bus coming Today though, I think I’ve completed her task I’ll test the device, it’s not a big ask I smile at her urn on my stone mantle shelf then switch on the switch that she should switch herself I watch the display as it seeks out a sound the readout says “SEARCHING” and then it says “FOUND” Cacophonous melee, a room full of sound the creepings and crawlings of life all around From under the carpet and inside the walls but then a faint voice as it urgently calls The direction finder I cautiously turn to find that the voice emanates from her urn I cover my ears as I hear my love shout, “Where am I, it’s dark, let me out, let me out!” * I run from the house, the device still switched on I can’t bear her screams but I don’t want her gone I try to ignore, as I beat my retreat the howls and the screeches from beneath my feet The horrified squealing of insects in flight as oncoming windshields appear in their sight Two snails in the road emit stereo squeals and race from the path of a truck driver’s wheels The sounds of a slaughter will not let me pass the terrified lawn as a man mows his grass Inside his house as his wife makes a salad a lettuce cries out like a Halloween ballad A boy with an apple then freezes mid-munch as the apple cries out, “I don’t want to be lunch!” And still my love’s voice calling all of the while I have no recourse but to rotate the dial But now I hear curses which just seems absurd as they hail from a worm in the beak of a bird Everywhere, everything living in fear fear that as humans we’re not meant to hear My sanity calls for precision and luck and the pending arrival of that speeding truck The sonic device booms its ear splitting wails as it waits for the truck beside two speeding snails

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Date: 10/15/2022 8:04:00 PM
How do you spell 'Imagination?! ~ F L O O D! Amazing. ~ gw
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Terry Flood
Date: 10/17/2022 12:04:00 PM
Thanks, GW. Really not sure where this idea came from. Struggled a little with flow in one or two places, but got there in the end.
Date: 10/12/2022 8:56:00 AM
A wild ride through the land of Terry Flood, and I was not disappointed! Okay, so I'll admit that I rarely read a poem this long, but this one was worth it. The idea of magnified sound is fascinating! Also, the touch of horror as the sound comes from your wife's box. Whoa!
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Date: 10/12/2022 11:55:00 AM
If you’ve read the comments below, Milt, you’ll know that the poem was meant to end at the asterisk (ala Tales of the Unexpected). I pondered long on sticking with that but I liked the notion of ‘grassy genocide’ etc so I let my ‘pen’ have its way. Glad you gave it a chance. Terry
Date: 10/12/2022 3:43:00 AM
Your mention of a poem that took you four days to complete and hardly noticed certainly got my attention. oh my, Terry. Your personification of so many things was totally creepy and completely believable. The creepy crawlers, and the voice of your dead wife's ashes... a la Poe... Crazy thoughts in your head, verified by Jeff's comment. You don't need medication to prevent such Poe-like ramblings. This should've been POTD so more people could've read these wonderfully insane lines crafted in your mind. The oxymoronic lines written by as if by a moron, but hardly the case with your wit.
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Terry Flood
Date: 10/12/2022 11:46:00 AM
It’s fatal posting two poems at once, Jenna. I suspect a lot of people press the ‘show one poem per member’ button and so only see the last poem they posted. At any rate, I struggle to find much free time these days and reading time can be short, let alone time for commenting. So fair’s fair. Mind you, I’m not sure I’ve ever had a comment that included all three of these observations: Crazy; insane and moron. I’m seriously flattered… I think ;-) Terry
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/12/2022 4:52:00 AM
Terry, if I thought you were fishing for a compliment, I would not have read this one. I've felt the way you do about my poems. I remember some time back, having posted 2 poems on the same day... one I thought was very well written, the other a spoof on I can't remember what. Guess which one was made potd?
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Terry Flood
Date: 10/12/2022 4:25:00 AM
Oops, now I feel like I was fishing for compliments. I wasn’t but I’m grateful to receive them. It is disappointing when a poem you work hard on goes almost unnoticed, but the ones I spend longest on, are, by implication also the longest. And size definitely matters. I never think 40 people didn’t enjoy, I think 40 people saw a long poem and backed out. I take no offence and merely appreciate those few comments all the more. I’m glad you did enjoy this somewhat freaky write, Jenna. Thanks.
Date: 10/11/2022 10:20:00 AM
You're not well, and I'm very glad of that! Enjoyed this thoroughly, lol.
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Terry Flood
Date: 10/11/2022 11:10:00 AM
Hmmm… I shall take that as a compliment. Ha ha. Glad you enjoyed. Now… where’s my medication?
Date: 10/11/2022 12:27:00 AM
So entertaining and a bit horrifying! I'm afraid to look around (and Listen) in case something is howling! Elizabeth
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Date: 10/11/2022 12:47:00 AM
Thanks, Elizabeth. This was a classic case of a poem that wouldn’t stay finished. The asterisk indicates the intended end. My ‘pen’ had other ideas. Glad you enjoyed. Terry

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